Lovely, sad, and a very realistic take on if canon continued after the movie. Poor Francœur, Lucille was the angel who protected him and helped him find an outlet for his song.
He is trapped between two worlds now, in love with someone who will not reciprocate his feelings, and despite his loss, Lucille is all he knows, and her friends are his only protection.
He is doomed to watch forevermore.
Amazing job on writing this!

This was incredible. In my head this is what might have happened of Francoeur saw Lucille and Raoul kissing in her dressing room. Great work!

:'(
Dis made me sad

I do hope you write more! this is turning into something good :)

Well I just found out recently that this movie existed, and can't get enough of it lol, brilliant story/ writing so far I hope you continue it :)

Oh my goodness, this made me cry... :'(

Wonderfully done! The words flow perfectly! Just love to read from you

Another great chapter, can't wait for the next. What you write is exactly what I see in their eyes when I watch the movie. Which by the way , is now available in Canada on netflix and might explain the in flux of your readers. I googled the movie and one of your stories came up in the search.

You've had a surge in readers because you have a knack for writing! Your stories pull at the reader's heartstrings, and just pluck away, twining a song of emotion and FEELING with them. It's AMAZING.

You gotta feel for the poor guy. Rejection is always harsh. Nice work!

moi jadore les story it is very good write more sil vous plais an no i am not french

I love how you captured the depth and intensity of Francoeur's feelings for Lucille. You showed the many layers to his humanity, yet kept his differences in the forefront to remind us that this is more than just a case of unrequited love. Very well done!

This is just beautiful great job hon