|Reviews for Harriet Potter and the Minister of Magic|
| Fuyutaro son chapter 4 . 1/4/2013
please ignore my last review, i'm only half asleep at the moment, and after having a cup of coffee, my head finally started to work right (basically, when i wrote the other one, i was so close to falling asleep that i was getting angry at anything, even making crap up, sorry about that)
| Fuyutaro son chapter 3 . 1/4/2013
I'm sorry, i really am, but this review is probably going to sound like a flame:
is this girl bipolar? one minute she's angry, the next she's crying, then she's nervous. the only time i've ever known anyone to be like that, to be THAT extreme in there emotional flipflops is when a woman is on her period, but harry seems to be like that ALL the time. it's a bit much.
Also, the fact that harry has no backbone, but then says she does, and it keeps trying to pretend she does for all of five seconds is really annoying. if she's angry at someone, she shouldn't suddenly burst into tears in the drop of a hat, that's not having a backbone, that's spineless. Every time someone does something, she gets angry, then they yell at her, then she either bursts into tears or she forgives them instantly. it's only 3 chapters in and it's already become a theme.
| Edana1009 chapter 10 . 1/4/2013
Ok, first I absolutely love this story! It's really well-written and all the characterization and everything is just excellent. The only thing that I have some issues with is James. Harry and James's relationship is a little weird in some spots, in my opinion. I just mean that after what he did to Draco not once, but twice, it's like nothing changed between them. I think that she would have blown a gasket or at least got in a screaming match with him at some point yet nothing seems to change. I think that maybe the incidents with James being unreasonable are adding up a bit too much for my taste. I just think that too much has happened to have their relationship unchanged at this point, especially since you keep adding onto it. You set up their relationship as rocky to begin with so I would expect that after humiliating her a multitude of times and still not believing in her something would have to change. It's understandable that she be more lenient with her father, but she threw a hissy fit over being made into a barbie doll yet she just rolls over when he arrests Draco? I'm just constantly taken aback with her lack of reaction to what James does and it's a bit irritating since I'm waiting for her to blow up and it never does. Sorry, I know that was a bit of a wordy explanation, I'm just having some difficulty describing what I mean. Anyway, I love this story and I just can't wait for the next chapter!
| turtlepearlove chapter 10 . 1/3/2013
I love this
I've been searching ages to find a good fem harry fic
This is a masterpiece
looking fwd to more updates from you
| guest chapter 10 . 1/3/2013
I am so happy that you updated! I've been waiting anxiously! Anyway I love how you are moving the story along, I don't think it's rushed at all.
I seriously hate Peter and Hadriana! They are manipulative and evil, but I am glad that James put his foot down in this chapter, but he seriously needs to wake up and realize that he is nothing put a puppet for them and is being manipulated about everything! He needs to believe his daughter!
I hate Umbridge, but I'm excited to see how you write her. I'm also excited for Luna, and the Order, and DA. I also like how you portray the Malfoy's and Snape in this story and I'm anxious to see how they all play into 5th year. Keep up the good work! Update again soon please!
| schnookums chapter 10 . 1/3/2013
I don't know how patient I can be! Harry needs someone who will love her and trust her with everything! I certainly hope James comes around, and we find out what's going on with Peter. The rat drives me crazy. I also hope James breaks up with his model and starts seeing the lady from the flower shop. It was so sweet. Loved the chapter and can't wait for more.
| MirrorFlower and DarkWind chapter 10 . 1/3/2013
awww tht was awww and damn it umbridge i just watn to kill her and peter right now ugh i love Autumn though
| crisis what crisis chapter 10 . 1/3/2013
The father/daughter scene made me feel so many feels I can't even begin. I love where this story is heading and you write so well.
| David12leca chapter 10 . 1/3/2013
omfg this was epic please continue i loved it, the most fantastic fem harry i have read hands down ty so much.
| LaDiE AkEginU o.0.o chapter 10 . 1/3/2013
I can't wait till Luna enters the story. I was disappointed that she is not yet with Draco however it would not be a believable plot if they automatically got together like you said. The thing I am most anxious about is the revealing of Pettigrew's loyalty to the dark...I love this story and it is actually my favorite Fem!HP story I have read thus far, including your other stories.
| sleepyasian chapter 10 . 1/3/2013
FINISH PHOENIX TEARS!
| thelonglostpotter chapter 10 . 1/3/2013
this story is absolutely amazing! please keep writing! :)
| Fantasy-Mania31 chapter 10 . 1/3/2013
That was so sweet!
| dela1 chapter 10 . 1/3/2013
James is such an idiot.
| Freckleforce01 chapter 10 . 1/3/2013
AWWWWWW. LOVED James and that Autumn girl, so funny!