Reviews for Narutos shonen ai game
Guest chapter 1 . 7/10
I would call this interesting.. But your ruined the entire story.. How? Well you proved that yaoi fanfiction writers are terrible at making stories. Further digging your grave as one of the many annoyances in this website. Well for starters no I don't hate yaoi. And I don't mind it as long as it isn't shot. Seriously reread this and do your research before doing anything. That's all I'm saying, you forgot way too many things you need to keep and eye on making you look like you starting writing without a plan and only going in with your hormones. I'm gone btw cya.
Guest chapter 3 . 3/20
Awe I wanted KakaNaru or maybe even MinaNAru
reaver216 chapter 9 . 7/21/2015
please update as soon as you can hopefully sooner rather than later
Reaver216 chapter 9 . 6/30/2015
Please update this story i really want to know what happens next so PLEASE update soon i am waiting for more and some hot sex between Naruto and Kurama and if i can make a suggestion their first time kyuubi should be in his fox form i love beastiality
Guest chapter 9 . 6/26/2015
i hope you update soon
reaver216 chapter 9 . 3/19/2015
please update soon
strabimonx chapter 9 . 3/2/2015
Next chapter please
Guest chapter 9 . 1/27/2015
please update soon
Guest chapter 9 . 1/4/2015
to short please update soon
Guest chapter 9 . 12/20/2014
aw man such a long wait for so little
fireforge92 chapter 9 . 10/18/2014
update soon... Please?
TigrezzTail chapter 9 . 9/28/2014
Boy that sure would get aggravating after awhile. Especially if you didn't know what it was that was killing you in the first place!
vampireharry the 2 chapter 9 . 9/26/2014
Another excellent chapter! Keep up the great work!
Arcami chapter 9 . 9/25/2014
I think this is good though seeing that it is over two years old and I don't know when u restarted this. Also it is a good plot and the game system is different than others as it follows the gamer manga. Also with the addition of the shonen ai part is actually very different too seeing as no one has even done that seeing they either don't like it, or they can't think of a way to incorporate it into the system. Also with the pairings, I'm not sure if you are set on having Itachi, Kurama, or Shino as Naruto's lover, but could you try to put Naruto with Shikamaru. With what you said about having a stable mind to guide him, Shikamaru would be extremely helpful for Naruto to keep him grounded and even help him grow as a person. Also with this chapter, it would be easier for him to build a relationship with him too. All in all, I'm interested to see where you take it. I only have a word of advice, try to explain the changes that you made in the story that differ from the actual manga, seeing as there are few things that are different than what we are use to.
Good Luck,
Arcami
Muxi chapter 8 . 9/12/2014
I'm a bit confused about the timeline. I'm quite sure Itachi wasn't an ANBU when Naruto was born... Are you making him older or something? Also Tsunade wasn't in the village at that time... Are you talking author privileges in these matters? Thanks for writing
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