|Reviews for Narutos shonen ai game|
| reaver216 chapter 9 . 7/21
please update as soon as you can hopefully sooner rather than later
| Reaver216 chapter 9 . 6/30
Please update this story i really want to know what happens next so PLEASE update soon i am waiting for more and some hot sex between Naruto and Kurama and if i can make a suggestion their first time kyuubi should be in his fox form i love beastiality
| Guest chapter 9 . 6/26
i hope you update soon
| reaver216 chapter 9 . 3/19
please update soon
| strabimonx chapter 9 . 3/2
Next chapter please
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/27
please update soon
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/4
to short please update soon
| Guest chapter 9 . 12/20/2014
aw man such a long wait for so little
| fireforge92 chapter 9 . 10/18/2014
update soon... Please?
| TigrezzTail chapter 9 . 9/28/2014
Boy that sure would get aggravating after awhile. Especially if you didn't know what it was that was killing you in the first place!
| vampireharry the 2 chapter 9 . 9/26/2014
Another excellent chapter! Keep up the great work!
| Arcami chapter 9 . 9/25/2014
I think this is good though seeing that it is over two years old and I don't know when u restarted this. Also it is a good plot and the game system is different than others as it follows the gamer manga. Also with the addition of the shonen ai part is actually very different too seeing as no one has even done that seeing they either don't like it, or they can't think of a way to incorporate it into the system. Also with the pairings, I'm not sure if you are set on having Itachi, Kurama, or Shino as Naruto's lover, but could you try to put Naruto with Shikamaru. With what you said about having a stable mind to guide him, Shikamaru would be extremely helpful for Naruto to keep him grounded and even help him grow as a person. Also with this chapter, it would be easier for him to build a relationship with him too. All in all, I'm interested to see where you take it. I only have a word of advice, try to explain the changes that you made in the story that differ from the actual manga, seeing as there are few things that are different than what we are use to.
| Muxi chapter 8 . 9/12/2014
I'm a bit confused about the timeline. I'm quite sure Itachi wasn't an ANBU when Naruto was born... Are you making him older or something? Also Tsunade wasn't in the village at that time... Are you talking author privileges in these matters? Thanks for writing
| Reaver216 chapter 8 . 9/2/2014
He should show a strong intrest in Tsunade mild intrest in Jiraya no intrest in Orochimaru or Danzo you should have said he could dislike someone too
| Karasu Kagami chapter 1 . 8/11/2014
Why is it in the negatives theres 'Lost Zabuza' and plus 250?
If its a negative shouldnt it minus 250?
And why would zabuza dying gain you points?
Am i missing something here?
Backstory or something?
If i am shouldnt that be in the positives or something?
I like Zabuza...i am so confused...
I think this is the first time ive ever prayed for a typo... /
And oh god. Soft face? Im already watching as he leans more towards the uke section...i wonder if Kyubbi's advising that on purpose...and what is spicy hair? Does that mean spikey?
Well whatever, im sure it'll be cleared up soon...
Good start otherwise, and im really looking forward to the rest!