Reviews for He's Your Son
Zipporah.Michel chapter 1 . 9/23/2017
This story is super hilarious. This is exactly how I imagined link and minds as parents. XD
Guest chapter 1 . 2/11/2017
Haha nice job probably the most accurate midna in fanfictions with her attitude and all that. Great job and keep writing
Captain29thegamer chapter 1 . 3/9/2016
Shadowfalls221 chapter 1 . 4/18/2015
Hilarity all over!
timberwolf1337 chapter 1 . 1/18/2015
Very cute lol
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2014
Huh, cute story. Nice work!
sodaNK chapter 1 . 9/20/2013
Beautiful. Just beautiful.
Phantasma Lunae chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
Hahaha, Link and his 'freakish' child XD. Man, I so love the way you characterize Midna! She's just downright badass! I love it :)
Anon chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
This is quite cute! I'd like to see more family times with this group!
RedNemi chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
[If I'm late, the council are going to rip out my throat.]
'council' is singular. "the council is going..."

[While a mix of Twili and Hylian, Alex looked surprisingly human, bright blonde hair, dark red eyes.]
A semicolon or a with, I would say...and maybe replace the 'While' with an 'Although'...
"Although a mix of Twili and Hylian, Alex looked surprisingly human; bright blonde hair, dark red eyes."
Nah, I like the 'with' idea better...
"Although a mix of Twili and Hylian, Alex looked surprisingly human, with bright blonde hair and dark red eyes."
Also I'm not sure if it's spelled blonde or blond...

[Whatever kind of sword she was referring to, Link still felt a little irritated.]

['Sounds like someone I know.'
'Who was he?'
'An idiot.'
It then hit. 'Oh, me. Of course.']
I see what you did there XD.

This was very comical haha. At first I thought Midna was a little soft, but such thoughts were obliterated very quickly. You're such an awesome author, great job!