|Reviews for Heavenly Resolve|
| Zorah chapter 16 . 1/5
The plot and interweaving of characters is very intriguing. Your writing style is engaging as well as, exciting. This is one of the better written stories I have read. Keep up with the good work!
| fandelivres chapter 16 . 1/4
o yessss! please give us this next chapter, it sounds thrilling!
| The Chicagoan Spitfire chapter 16 . 1/4
Before I begin my review, Merry belated Christmas and Happy New Year to you, as well! I would have reviewed a lot sooner had I not been so busy, but I'm here now. :D
Now, I have to tell you... This update did not disappoint in the slightest! Now that Celeste knows of Shang Tsung's shapeshifting tendencies (good on her mom for warning her ahead of time, by the way!), maybe she'll be able to defeat her opponents in Mileena's tournament. It sure seems like a lot of trouble is headed her way, and I hope Shang Tsung doesn't end up taking Sub-Zero's form if he fights against her. That would really be sucky, since she and Sub-Zero are very close... Either way, I'm sure you'll surprise us in the forthcoming chapters, and I look forward to them. :)
Moreover, I have to admit something: I really love how you have given Panedere a personality of her own. Now, I know she's technically dead in the traditional sense (it was mentioned a few chapters back), but the little things - her flinching upon Celeste's arrival to her garden at the beginning of this chapter, for example - just add a lot of depth to her overall role in this story. Most writers wouldn't do that with a dead character, but the fact that you did was really worth it. Therefore I definitely have to tell you that I really enjoy Panedere's interactions with her daughter, because that also adds character to her and especially to Celeste.
In conclusion, this story has definitely come a VERY long way since the first chapter, and I am very happy for your continuous improvement! You're definitely one of the most inspiring people on this site, and you should be proud of yourself for it! :)
| Allemande10 chapter 16 . 1/1
OHH pliss continue
| mkfreak123 chapter 16 . 1/1
hm...I guessing that sub-zero?
| KakuseiSchiffer chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
Are you going to be updating soon? :)
| fandelivres chapter 15 . 8/9/2013
yes!things getting really thrilling I absolutly looooove your version of sub-zero in his relationship with celeste, and I can't wait to see the beginning of the tournament:) please, be quick!
| Ace of Spies chapter 15 . 8/9/2013
Nice, cant wait for the next chapter. Did you have Mileena change the rules because somehow they benefit her, or because you prefer double elimination over single elimination? Just wondering.
Cant wait for the next update! Kenshi vs Reptile? Hmm. Idk, not really a fair fight. Reptile is a warrior trained in stealth. He uses invisibility to his advantage, but its useless against someone like Kenshi who cant see in the first place. I dont think Reptile can disguise anything other than sight, so Kenshi should win relatively easy.
Whoa. Long review. Sorry lol
| Nentone chapter 15 . 8/9/2013
You better not abandon this fic or else I shall unleash the horrors of cyberspace upon thee. Muhahaha!
Pls update soon.
| The Chicagoan Spitfire chapter 15 . 8/9/2013
I nearly fell out of my chair in surprise when I got the notification for this story in my email inbox. It made my night! :D
Now, I didn't think Celeste would pass out in Sub-Zero's room after their little dance the night before, but I thought it was very sweet of him to be a gentleman and let her sleep on his bed while he took the floor. That was unexpected, but very adorably sweet nonetheless. I'm sure it was awkward for them both as well, but I'm not even disappointed!
Ah, Mileena... I honestly love how you described her outfit for this tournament. It sounds a lot more beautiful and elegant compared to what she does wear in the games. The confident welcome speech she gives to the Kombatants wasn't expected, either, since Mileena's not the type of warrior I can imagine as sounding and appearing to be highly intelligent, let alone reasonable. Of course, with her being on the Forces of Darkness, I'm certain she has an ulterior motive. She wouldn't be Mileena if she didn't, now, would she?
Either way, I really have enjoyed how you've taken your time with this story thus far. I know you don't update as much, but I'm not mad about it. That just means more time on your hands to make the updates as awesome as they are. You never fail to impress me with the effort that you put forth into each and every chapter. I've got high expectations for the next update, and I will patiently await it. :)
Great work, my friend!
| mkfreak123 chapter 15 . 8/8/2013
can't wait! Kenshi vs Reptile does sound like a good match! How about Li Mei vs khameleon(by the way, which side is she on anyway?) for a future match?
| memmek10k chapter 14 . 7/19/2013
| Ace of Spies chapter 12 . 6/19/2013
OH MY GOD(if there is oneagnostic) OH MY HOLY SHIT I CANNOTEVENDESCRIBEHOWGOODTHISCHAPTER WAS. THAT WAS AWESOME. POOR CELESTE.
Damn you were right, Celeste isnt overpowered. She makes mistakes like everyone else. I cannot thank you enough for that. It has been awesome seeing how Celeste grows and changes.
When it comes to OC's, my expectations are high. But you surpassed them by a mile with this entire story. This chapter is the icing on the cake. You managed to prove me wrong in about every way. I am so thankful for that.
You have a great story. Keep up the excellent work.
| Ace of Spies chapter 8 . 6/17/2013
Amazing chapter. I just wondered. Is Celeste half Edenian or full? Will this be revealed in the later chapters and since Edenians age extremely slow, does this also work with Celeste?
| Ace of Spies chapter 7 . 6/6/2013
Well, done with Chapter 7. Interesting to say the least.
I must say, I did see that coming. It was a nice cliffhanger, but once she felt "attracted" to the hut, I guessed it was a place from her past. There were a couple other small things, and once u mentioned then name of "the woman" kinda figured it was her mother.
Still, excellent chapter. I like the way this story is unfolding, its good we learn something about Celeste's past.
Speaking of Celeste, I like the way she is coming along. Keep up the good work!