Reviews for My Heart Belongs To You
sheerio4ever chapter 2 . 8/1/2013
I don't want to be mean, but you said all reviews were welcome so this is a construtive critisism (is that how you spell it?) review:
I think you should work on your grammer, especially your capitals. sheerio4ever x
Totalbooknerd13 chapter 7 . 8/1/2013
Awwww they are precious!
CherrySlushLover chapter 7 . 8/1/2013
Its improved a lot since I read your first chapter! Really brilliant chapter, I loved all the sydrian and I'm glad that Sydney now feels comfortable in front Jill, Eddie and angeline. I loved the way she couldn't concentrate on the film because of Adrian, but I do think she would've been a bit more worried about the murders.
Update soon! :)
Anon chapter 2 . 1/24/2013
The idea of the story is actually pretty good, HOWEVER, I find it very hard to read with the incorrect grammar/spelling.
Andy2900 chapter 6 . 1/24/2013
MarijaV chapter 2 . 12/11/2012
I really want to read this story but some grammar is necessary.
QueenoftheSydrianites chapter 5 . 12/1/2012
lol luv it i can just imagine Eddie sat with a cat playing in his room x good chap hun
Guest chapter 4 . 10/6/2012
Story is promising but would be even better if you read through it and did a spell check before. Also capital letters, as it makes it easier to read. However, I'm liking the plot and can't wait to read more
Guest chapter 4 . 10/4/2012
aaaaaaaaaah what happened after that ?
GRAMMAR NAZI chapter 4 . 10/4/2012
Guest chapter 4 . 10/4/2012
Yay i loved the chapter update soon please :-)
Nana chapter 3 . 9/21/2012
Guest chapter 3 . 9/21/2012
Check the spelling and read it through before posting it.
The story is good and I like the way its going keep it up.
sydrain4eva chapter 3 . 9/21/2012
Love it love it love it adrain is so sweet when he comforts her I need a kiss mtey. Also I love the part when jill acts like sydneys mum looking after her and drivung her to adrains. Xxx:)
wegee chapter 2 . 9/19/2012
I love it update everyday or two or three times a week this story is different and really nice.
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