Reviews for Descent into rapture
lycan13 chapter 2 . 11/12
Liea's to old to be a Little Sister, they're 4 not 10
Style chapter 5 . 9/22
Where's the lolicon content you promised?
Anonymus chapter 4 . 7/25/2013
dude... why won't you update?
please man, if you are still alive, please let us know... with more chapters.
barber477 chapter 4 . 4/29/2013
good story so far, cant wait for the next chapter! :)
SpartanOfNovaTitan chapter 4 . 4/29/2013
Awesome as Always.
Gravespawn chapter 3 . 3/26/2013
Getting good. Hope you update soon.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
This is good I hope you make more of the story its getting really interesting and I want to know what happens next.
HighbornCrab chapter 3 . 3/3/2013
Update update update!
HighbornCrab chapter 2 . 3/3/2013
I NEED MORE!
HighbornCrab chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
Nice. More punctuation, and it would be perfect.
barber477 chapter 3 . 1/31/2013
awesome chapter, I hope the next one doesn't take as long though! BTW, awesome fight scene!
SpartanOfNovaTitan chapter 3 . 1/30/2013
Awesome.
SpartanOfNovaTitan chapter 2 . 1/7/2013
Spartan-300 likes. Good story. Also a scene where they have all the avengers watching the big daddies and little sisters talking. And where they just start asking random questions. Would be awesome
barber477 chapter 2 . 1/5/2013
I like it, please keep going. :)
pyroinfurno chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
deffintly a better start than the last one

good story what will happen when they open it
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