|Reviews for The one that makes me proud|
| Raven Iris chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
i think that you should write a sequel. it's a really good story. :)
| Dragonscorch chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
Took him long enough... XD
| Danny Hellcat chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
the name you were trying to spell means angel of the night or nightengel i believe.
| yurithefurry chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
ITS SO FLUFFY! This story is just to cute. I think Jack is adorable i can see why Maddie loves for the great read.
| GuardianWitchDemiGhost chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
VGF:But fluff is good! *hugs a cartoon verson of the word 'Fluff'* Its ok fluff, not everyone likes you but its ok. Lol. xD This was good I knew jack wasnt a complete dummy! :P I will end with my goodbyes,Ta.
| DazzlerAngel chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
This story was so awesome!
| greasergirl0003 chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
I really liked that. I would love to hear more.
| danny1FANtom chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
Cwool! Dam Walker! :)
| jeanette9a chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
a sequel would be awesome but this is really cool too!
| Universal808 chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
Wow. This is good for a one-shot. Good work! I don't think I would be able to write something like this. And this story would probably be an AU.
AU means Another Universe where Jack is smarter and stuff.
| jxnki chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
Wow. This was actually pretty good for someone writing in a language that isn't their native one. Some mistakes, but obviously they're excusable.