Reviews for SAO Apricot Spring
Donny chapter 10 . 10/15/2012
Wow, Okay. Nope. That didn't just happen. That's not okay.
I thought Horn's death was unbearable. Wow, okay. Is there anything happy in this? Any sort of relief? Wow. Okay.
I'm not okay after this.
Donny chapter 8 . 10/15/2012
Wow, that uh. that's not okay.
I don't know whether to call this tragically beautiful
or to call it beautifully tragic.
wow. There's many things that are okay in this world. What just happened was not one of them.
Donny chapter 3 . 10/14/2012
I hope to see a lot more of Kyou. I think he's a very likable character in a risky sense that draws in the minds of readers instead of tugging on their heart strings like in Maru's case. I love the way he processes the things around him and even how clever he is. All in all, it feels very realistic despite being inside a video game.
It's pretty great so far, so keep it up.
HOLDEN chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
oh and if you guys could write me porn books go for it
Guest chapter 11 . 10/2/2012
Grant, i'm doing this for you, and only you, you needy son of a bitch. Your shit is awesome, this story makes me wet, no lie. I really do enjoy reading it, and i have nothing bad to say, although here is some constructive criticism, i want sexy sexy time get some more love interest in, and also, i want to see some ass kicking, and dont worry about being to technical i like that shit yo.
SoulElixir chapter 3 . 9/25/2012
Your story is the type that motivates me to continue FanFics :)

Your wording is great, I loved the idea of having siblings together to try and survive together. It really opens up a brand new world (One Piece reference) for a lot of other plots.

And, I like your creation of weapons/skills up to this point.

Honestly, I wish I had time to sit here and read through all of this :) But, I shall get through and read it all.

An excellent story. I expected great and I recieved more.

I will await new chapters once I finish the next 7 Chapters xD

Keep on writing! Continue to bless FanFiction with your talented writing! :)
Romo chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
I am ur numbah one fan
Guest chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
Is this being written by two different people? Unless you're just great at picking changing between Kyou and Haru, because between the two of them are completely different writing styles. I loved reading from Kyou's POV because the mental images set were just amazing, but when I read through Haru's POV so much happened and so much action was fit in not too much text. Keep writing because it I'd love to see how things turn out. Haru and Kyou obviously meet so I'd love to see that happen.
FrostyMouse chapter 5 . 9/14/2012
Hmm, it's a curious story. Are Haru and Kyou going to meet up at some point? They don't really seem like the type to get along, because Haru and his brothers seem upstanding and righteous, whereas Kyou is a thief. I mean, you could be having the three men at the end of chapter five be them, but that would seem a bit odd and out of character for what we've seen out of the three of them so far.
AmosTheBaka chapter 3 . 9/12/2012
I understand that the title is messed up. I was unallowed to put a hyphen between Onii and Chan. But you should understand what it means.
WhizkidHV chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
Interesting story so far, but the levels of your OCs are off. After a month in the game, the highest leveled players were only just about to reach level ten. That included the solo players as well.