|Reviews for Beautiful Chaos|
| Hawkeye chapter 17 . 1/19
Awesome fights! Hope "next time" comes sooner.
| The Epic Legion chapter 17 . 1/19
I saw you added the separation lines between the scenes from Cyril and Hilde, good. Hilde's father lost a hand but at least he is alive and about Tyra... well she is screwed. That town is going to be a huge graveyard when Cyril is done. Hm... Zanshin was a mighty enemy for Cyril but it was not enough to beat him, I see. Now, I wonder what is Xandra doing? What is Link and Ezio doing? What is Spawn going to do next? Where are the Greek sisters? Where is Talim? There's a lot of questions but I guess I'll wait for the next update. Good work!
| WhiteHero chapter 17 . 1/18
Well, Cyril is going to take his sweet time to dig and make the tombs for those who were killed, even if he is a sentinel, after that fight, he must be really tired; and Tyra has been captured... Hilde is going to torture her.
Can't wait to see what the other characters are doing.
| JerichoCross chapter 17 . 1/18
Well, I just hope you don't take this long for the next one. Thanks for writing this chapter.
| LoveMadness chapter 17 . 1/18
From Cyril to Hilde and back with Cyril with no separation made this chappie a bit difficult to follow... I suggest you check that when you can.
| Lucius chapter 17 . 1/18
Some parts are a bit confusing because there are no separation lines between scene breaks.
| Alciel chapter 17 . 1/18
Mmmm... I wanted to see how the others were doing but well...
| The Reader of Souls chapter 17 . 1/18
Late review, I know... but I at least write one. So... things are moving forward with the plot, huh? Can't wait for the next chaps.
| The Azure Heart chapter 17 . 1/18
| Clover chapter 17 . 1/18
Nice to see a new update of this.
| Guest chapter 17 . 1/18
Good chapter. Been waiting for more of this.
| Sir Avarice the Dark Novelist chapter 17 . 1/17
Damn! That's one hell of an attack!
Great job, can't wait for more!
| JerichoCross chapter 16 . 11/19/2013
With all that have been said in those two reviews, I will leave that matter aside. So, Tyra finally thinks about Cyril, I hope her darker side also fall for him... that can be good for Cyril... right? So, I assume that Cyril in that moment reminded Amy of a certain green-clad sneezer, interesting.
A solid chapter as always. Good job!
| Clover chapter 16 . 11/19/2013
| Sven Vollfield chapter 16 . 11/17/2013
Sorry dude, but that really pissed me off. Ezio is my favorite character of all time, just to see him reduced to some stupid guy who just gets killed despite how badass he is was really annoying. As I said in my last review, he is indeed a good writer, but I will not read something I don't like.
Anyway, there was not much action besides Shura getting completely stomped by Cyril but I enjoyed that, this bitch deserved it! With Naeglin, he will cut that demon like butter, just like when Link uses the Master sword against anything that is evil.
Good Job with this chapter. See you in the next update.