Reviews for Criticize
goldsworthys chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
MAN THIS WAS GOOD. it's so hard to find really good fics and this was brilliant.

I loved how it started out with him angry. I know it's kind of stupid but I love fics where Eli is like a dickish bad guy that is like almost scary in a way. Yay for written manic episodes

Also this line "At least I wasn't wearing Spiderman boxers like my stud muffin boyfriend hovering above me" I literally cackled that was perfect god bless you for that Jesus Christ!

So well done. I don't know how old this fic is but seriously thanks for writing it it made my night and the smut was short and on point and just all around great THANK YOU FOR EXISTING.
ANAHI'Simagnation chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Ahahhaha that was hot! XD like omfg! U should write one about them doing it in the Boiler room!
missmaggiemaybe chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
This is amazing. You are such a great writer.
The Cliffhanger Girl chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
Loved it! Haven't read an Eli hoarder story/one-shot in a while! :)