Reviews for Abyss
BlackDragonShinigami chapter 21 . 6/2/2016
awesome story. i don't feel like going for reading the sequal tho. bye bye. nice story
Guest chapter 20 . 8/20/2013
How could you just kill Red like that!? He's an amazing character and I nearly cried at the hospital scene... Nearly.
And I've been wondering about a couple of things... Like why Red decide to kill himself? Sorry if the answer was obvious, but I just could figure out what went wrong... Was it because of Touko, his past, or something entirely different? Because I couldn't figure out what went wrong...
Another question, why were the Pokemon in the beginning acting all ill? You never really explained that throughout the story... And for a while I was pretty confused.

Anyways it was an amazing story an I enjoyed it greatly. You should make a sequel! And I think that you should write it in Red's point of view throughout the story before he died. That would spice things up a bit. Well that's what I think you should do... So if you ever decide to actually make a sequel, I think it should be based on Red's point of view before he died. Any who, good luck and keep up the good work
Chibi-Aibou-Midna chapter 19 . 7/17/2013
Damn! Despite how short this sort of was it still had my interest!
Chibi-Aibou-Midna chapter 18 . 7/15/2013
Aww that's sad! :( But despite that I love this chapter!
Shadow Flame 777 chapter 10 . 6/19/2013
AWW! Red's so shy and adorable and wonderful! *dies of the fluffiness*
Shadow Flame 777 chapter 8 . 6/19/2013
AWW! Red got a date XD
Chibi-Aibou-Midna chapter 17 . 4/16/2013
Don't worry!
Library2.0 chapter 16 . 3/7/2013
It was a good chapter for a long wait. Update.
Chibi-Aibou-Midna chapter 16 . 3/7/2013
Wow how conflicting this chapter was.
Drayllien chapter 16 . 3/7/2013
Finally a new chapter
keep it up!
Smhmari chapter 15 . 2/17/2013
Good chapter. Update!
Mewchu chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
This is interesting, and Red seems cold in character.
Chibi-Aibou-Midna chapter 15 . 2/17/2013
Wow I'm glad to know you update at least! I'm happy with that!
Chibi-Aibou-Midna chapter 14 . 2/3/2013
Don't worry your not the only one!
Library2.0 chapter 14 . 2/3/2013
Great chapter. Sometimes though you miss capitalizing.
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