|Reviews for Challenge The Shadows|
| Autobotgirl2234 chapter 7 . 7/20/2013
I hope Optimus and Elita can have more kids someday.
| Autobotgirl2234 chapter 6 . 7/20/2013
I hope Optimus and Elita will be okay.
| Autobotgirl2234 chapter 5 . 7/20/2013
That was confusing.
| Autobotgirl2234 chapter 4 . 7/20/2013
| Autobotgirl2234 chapter 3 . 7/20/2013
That was a wonderful kiss.
| Autobotgirl2234 chapter 2 . 7/20/2013
I hope Optimus and Elita will be able to have more kids.
| Autobotgirl2234 chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
I hope they land safely.
| Cee Marie chapter 7 . 2/21/2013
... I still hate you...
...please update... PLEASE!
| StarGazingAtMidnight chapter 7 . 11/22/2012
OH THANK FRIG!
YOU SCAREDED ME! I THOUGHT YOU HAD KILLED THEM!
D'aaawwwww, Optimus is so protective...so cute *squeals like a fangirl*
IT HAS JUST HIT ME THAT JAZZ IS ALIVE! THIS FIC IS BEYOND PERFECT! :*
*BOWS AT YOU FEET AND CHANTS 'I AM NOT WORTHY*
I don't even know what he did and I already am going to kill Shockwave...
PRIME CHILDISH MOMENT! ME LOVES IT! :D
Now I'm crying again...poor Tempest and Shadow...and poor Optimus and Elita...and their little unborn baby...'scuse me *goes to sob in the corner*
OH GOD ELITA WHY?! DONT DO THIS TO YOURSELF!
STAP MAKING ME CRY! I GET ALL SNOTTY AND GROSS!
WHO ARE THESE HUMANS?! WHO PLANTED THE BOMBS?! WILL THEY EVER HAVE KIDS?! WHEN WILL YOU UPDATE?!
SO MANY QUESTIONS!1
| StarGazingAtMidnight chapter 6 . 11/22/2012
...O.o you can hear me all the way from Ireland? Damn, I didn't think I was THAT loud...
I'm really sad right now...Optimus and Elita are at death's door...And W(ho)TF IS TANYA?!
SO MANY QUESTIONS!11
| StarGazingAtMidnight chapter 5 . 11/22/2012
Ohhhh...very mysterious... Me likey ;)
| StarGazingAtMidnight chapter 4 . 11/22/2012
BEEEE! So happy he's turned up! Aww, he so cute! *to bee* whos a cute lil bot? you are! yes, you are!
Very nice descrip of Elita xD
I love Sam/Carly...They seem so happy...but Elita... *cries* *shakes fist* STOP MAKING ME CRY GODDAMMIT! No, don't, it means you're an epic author for killing my feels!
WHAT?! WHAT WHAT WHAT WHAT?! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOO! I HAVE ONLY REALLY KNOW ELITA FOR LIKE 3 CHAPTERS AND I AM WELLLING UP! YOU CANT KILL HER! AND OPTIMUS! BEGGING FOR HER?! ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME?!
*Curls into ball, sobbing, and hits 'next' button...*
| StarGazingAtMidnight chapter 3 . 11/22/2012
Deffo agree...Elita is MUCH better as White-and-gold rather than pink. Pink makes me think of cute little bots who cry when they dent a screw, and that is SO NOT ELITA!
...Primus, Optimus is such a sweetheart!
Ohhh, gold optics... niiiiice...
LMAO...I can just hear Optimus's deep 'Oh joy'... teehehe
IRONHIDE! IRONHIDE IRONHIDE IRONHIDE!-Okay, I can read on very happily ;D
...I hate Galloway. So. freaking. much! HOW DARE HE DISRESPECT ELITA! GRRRRRRR *Attacks with apples, cause apples are rubbish*
'Universal Law laid down by the Kalterain Empress ten thousand mega-cycles ago, during the Age of Utopia'-that sounds very very badass and epic xD
AH! Flirty Optimus is so awesome and smooth! ;D
*DIES FROM SHEER ADORABLENESS*
| StarGazingAtMidnight chapter 2 . 11/22/2012
barely two paragraphs in and I'm already 'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW'-ing
...now crying slightly at poor Optimus :'(
I LOVE ELITA! Ahe is so PERFECT for Optimus!
AHH! AS I TYPE THIS, SHELDON ON TBBT STARTED TALKING ABOUT TRANSFORMERS! :O
Ohh Sapphire...interesting... ;D
...I loVe it when cons deflect... :D
...NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! WHY WHY WHY WOULD YOU WRITE SOMETHING AS HEART-BREAKING AS THAT?! OPTIMUS AND ELITA WOULD HAVE BEEN PERFECT PARENTS! AND YOU JUST KILL THEIR SPARKLINGS?! HOW-WHY WHY WHY?!
NOT THE POINT!
I love this. I think that's really bad CAUSE YOU HAVE JUST TORTURED MY FAVOURITE CHARACTERS!, but I am LOVING this fic so so so much!
| StarGazingAtMidnight chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
GAH! I HATE POLITICIANS TOO! How DARE they make our already-stressed-beyond-belief bots more stressed! GAH!
*grabs paintball gun to go splatter them*
And, may I just say, I LOVE Lennox here! He is so protective of the bots! Liking Jess too!