|Reviews for Only The Beginning|
| KittyKatnissEverdeen chapter 1 . 2/18
THIS SHOULD HAVE HAPPENED IN THE BOOK!
Great story, by the way. :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
This is a good story, but it would be better if it had less errors in it. There were a lot of missing words and grammatical errors.
| Neisha Chetty chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
That's the closest to the "voice of cathy" that's so predominant through the first two novels. Just a little more to add to Cathy. She is very much like the woman she hates so much- her mum. Petals on the Wind as well as If There be Thorns exposes that. Here is some additional things to ponder on. Hi. I know many of you love the books. But Petals on the Wind is equally brilliant. Look at little deeper. How could Julian have commited suicide if he was paralysed neck down? Why did Cathy have sex with Paul when she was with Chris. And she puts a candle in the attic to let the house catch on fire, the incident that Bart dies. She must tell them she loves them before they die so they can forgive her. Bart dies before that. How did she know how many doughnuts Carrie consumed? The package was empty. Pay attention to the words Spanish Moss 'love the clung and clung until it killed'. As they say the devil is in the detail. Analyse this book using Chris as your mentor. He questions things. E_mail ;
| jellybeans chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
Awesome! I like it.
| FireStarDragon chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
Loved it. The characters were portrayed so well, and I just love the emotion in the story. Great job. Thanks so much for writing this!
| JinxNightshade chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
Oh my gosh, thank you. you have written this perfectly. the characters are in character. that need for love is there but so is the feeling of cathy's teetering decisions.
and can you believe that this is my all time favorite book and i just realized today that it actually is on fanfiction?!
please continue to write with the passion that you have put into this fanfic.
| sarahmichellegellarfan1 chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
Loved It.. You did a great job!
| XxxCathylovexxX chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
I haven't seen a Dollanganger story in awhile and I gotta say, this is flawless! I think you captured the characters emotions very well and you write almost as if it's the author herself. I absolutely love it.