Reviews for Where There Is Smoke
tiffany chapter 1 . 7/17/2017
Hi don't worry this story is very good you should definitly continue this you have a talent for writing i should know i have read at least 50 fanfictions. And i would have stopped reading if i didn't like the and this is only the first chapter so please continue writing as love to know how this ends.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
Countine please this is like ahhh I want more please im following you from fanfiction app
But countine please
Inuyasha'sLoveKagome chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
this is very good and i would love to read more.
Dark-Kissx chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
Oh my god, PLEASE continue!
ReadPrayWorship chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
This is really great writing. I really like the detail. Please please please please PLEASE...continue this!
WestlyHitachiin chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
This is so good! Keep writing it! I'm looking forward to reading more!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
I really like it but I don't think you should continue it. Where are you thinking of going with it?
Like I said before, I really like it though. This is written NOT with them being OOC, and that's always good.

-QUeen of Narnia49
InuFreak91 chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
I enjoy this! I'm intrigued to see where you'll go with it, thou I have some ideas ;P
Keep up the awesome work!
xXxAddicted2ChocolatexXx chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
Wooooah! This is so awesome! I have an idea where this story is going, but I'm not 100 percent sure. Update soon so I can prove my brain right! :D
inukag luver 1 chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
THAT WAS REALLY GOOD, but i think u should continue it cuz ending the story end in a flashback doesnt look so good, but other then that it was really good
Lozenger12 chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
I LOVE IT! Can't wait for more!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
Continue continue continue! Please! It's really entertaining, in character, and follows Canon, which is difficult combination to find.
Bleach fan25 chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
So what happens next?
L chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
Is worth continuing! :D please, please more!
K'haku chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
I like this story, I think you should continue it :D
Your writing is good, and your grammar is fine, the idea is interesting. I can't wait for more :D
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