Reviews for The Fall of Lord Frieza
Hektols chapter 53 . 3/23
So Bills doesn't destroy Frieza when he insults and attacks him but is eager to destroy Earth because someone took the last pudding.
Hektols chapter 52 . 3/23
Bills it's there, it will be fun.
Hektols chapter 51 . 3/23
Good one.
Hektols chapter 50 . 3/23
You forgot something about Broly, while it is true that the acumulated energy damages him forcing to expel the excess of ki, as a saiyan, his body gets stronger after resting, making him able to handle higher power levels after each transformation.

Interesting twist making the young ogre into the equivalent of Ub.
Hektols chapter 49 . 3/23
Good work.
Hektols chapter 48 . 3/23
Well, Bra liked fighting and training, unlike Trunks or Goten who lost interest when they grew up, then we have to take account that she was the youngest while her older half siblings were now more independent and finally there is the issue that she is the one born with more power and potential, something that needed to be mastered, of course Vegito would spend more time with her.

Loved the part with Vegeta and Piccolo finding out that Janemba can be hurt with insults.
Hektols chapter 47 . 3/22
Well, I completely disagree with your opinion of Dragon Ball Multiverse, Vegito, Broly and Bra are not Sues just because they are superstrong, their strength is perfectly explained and I'm sorry if you don't like the backstories of the participants because they are really interesting, you may not want to know how that Buu defeated the Z Fighters but the great majority of readers were curious about it.
Hektols chapter 46 . 3/22
Good to see Frieza giving Cold what he deserved.
Hektols chapter 45 . 3/22
There goes Raichi.

I disagree with the two Death Battles, they just combined different, outdated versions of Superman into one instead of taking the modern version with more manageable power levels, with that criteria they could have used fanon versions of Goku to fight him.
Hektols chapter 44 . 3/22
You could have used another excuse for Tien not being available, undermining the healing abilities of someone able to heal holes in the gut the size of coconuts is not believeable.
Hektols chapter 43 . 3/22
Good origin story for the new form.
Hektols chapter 42 . 3/22
Very interesting transformation.
Hektols chapter 41 . 3/22
Good fight and good for the dead Vegeta using King Kai to warn the others.
Hektols chapter 40 . 3/22
Raichi is really evil and arrogant, of course magic exists, the Dragon Balls are proof enough.
Hektols chapter 39 . 3/22
Good work.

I wonder if the good guys will be able to use the Divine Water to free Goku as happened in the Baby saga.
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