Reviews for Mobilis in Mobili
Nashoid chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
Wonderful Story :D
Tempest of Reach chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
Short, but in my opinion. Powerful.
LesserWraith chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
Someone show this to Riot. It's awesome!
Anon chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
You have beautiful prose. This was great.
Zero612 chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
Sounds like an epic beginning to a Nautilus POV.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
This is very good. Nowadays it's hard to find fanfics which aren't parodies or humor versions. Your take on Nautilus is both beautiful andmfitting, capturing the depressing essence of the character while retaining the misteriousness of the fenomenon which turned him into what he is now. 5 stars.

My advice? It's perfect this way. Leave this one like this. But by all means keep writing. I'd be a very happy reader if I could read another Nautilus story written by you.
KillingEdge chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
I really like this. You captured Nautilus's personality so well, and it's really cool how you incorporated one of his in-game quotes. I feel like that must have been something he continually told himself as he wandered the ocean floor, and it's eerie and awesome at the same time. Please continue. Nautilus doesn't get many stories, it seems.