Reviews for ZEVIE ABC one shot
MegaDiary123 chapter 18 . 6/12/2013
Nice:)
WinterRoseQT chapter 18 . 12/21/2012
how come this is the same with questions? but anyway its still good
AMrocks21 chapter 18 . 12/18/2012
Cute!
Dis-Iz-Da-Lyfe chapter 18 . 12/18/2012
Hey, I really like these! But you have A LOT of errors, maybe you could get a beta? It would make it easier to read :)
XxMockingjay'sliveineveryoneXx chapter 17 . 11/26/2012
Couple grammar mistakes but cute nonetheless.
XxMockingjay'sliveineveryoneXx chapter 16 . 11/16/2012
I like the stories but you have a lot of grammar and punctuation mistakes.
Guest chapter 16 . 10/17/2012
awsome i luv this maybe u could do quiet or quiz for Q srry if my ideas suck
AMrocks chapter 16 . 10/13/2012
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW that was so sweet
HatersGoing2Hate chapter 5 . 10/11/2012
Actually it's from fresh price of bell air but I can see how u though that.
Guest chapter 5 . 10/9/2012
it is from that life alert comercial
dawsonxmoon chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
A lot of your sentences are run ons, so a little more punctuation would help :)

Also, besides the run on sentences, you have a tendency to abbreviate things, which is a total NO-NO. Not trying to be rude AT ALL, but if you have dreams of being a professional writer, if you abbreviated anything other in a text format you'd be fired right then and there.

This story isn't bad at all, I actually think it's pretty good. This was just constructive critiscm and I'm not trying to make you feel bad at all :)

-Keep writing!

Xoxo, Grace 3

P.S.: If you want to contact me, PM me or contact me on Twitter if you have one at Love_Forever_13.
AMrocks chapter 15 . 10/8/2012
OHHHH so sweet! Zevie came in my life for a reason and that too make me smile, and your story does the same! Update soon!
thepandarawrs chapter 14 . 9/26/2012
The story is so cuuute! I know it's annoying that I said that last two words but it's so cute and this is like my daily dose of Zevie so here are some for O:

Octopus
Ocean

You don't have to use them. They're just some small ideas. Good luck!
thepandarawrs chapter 13 . 9/25/2012
I LOVE THIS! I NEED MOREEE! Here are some for n:
New
Noodles
Noble
Neon

Good luck! Hope we can see a new chapter soon!
thepandarawrs chapter 12 . 9/24/2012
Can u make the next word Monkey?
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