|Reviews for Vampire|
| shiznat1234 chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
Interesting prologue! :) I shall follow this! Can't wait to read more :D
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/1/2012
write more please
| A2463 chapter 4 . 10/19/2012
Love it very much! Please continue!
| Lui Chick chapter 4 . 10/1/2012
well i have to say that I LOVE this story... i mean, I've always loved Natsuki and see her in a Vampire rol makes me love her even more! i like the way you write and how you separate the story with little sub titles, Oh My Shizuru is dead! maaan i guess we'll have to wait to know what are you planing,.. i have an idea, but i don't wanna ruin anything so shh xP
Good Luck with the rest of the story, believe me, it's awesome!
| JJ chapter 4 . 9/28/2012
Wow. What a gem of a story. Aaaaand you made me cry. Shiz didn't deserve so much suffering (T-T)
| PostoronnimV chapter 4 . 9/28/2012
WOW... Thank you very much for this incredibly awesome and powerful chapter))
Shizuru :'( Fate was cruel to her since childhood... First she lost her parents and in the end such a horrible death was waiting for her. Even if rewind a little to the moment... before she was bitten by Natsuki. Even then Shizuru's future did not seems really bright, no matter how you look at it. Even if Natsuki had not turned her into a vampire, she would have to get married not for love... it is also not a good perspective, but it is still a lot better than what happened to her... In that case, she would still be alive (and not a vampire) and she would have had a possibility to change things for the better... but Natsuki deprived her of such a possibility... But still I cannot fully blame Natsuki for what had happened. Shizuru is also at fault. Even Miss Maria at fault (she turned a blind eye to Natsuki's staying in her house, but maybe that is why she is so soon wanted to marry Shizuru off and thereby separate them, but instead, it's turned out a catalyst and sped up the process, but this is all speculation on my part)... Anyway, back to Shizuru... She knew from the start that she was playing with fire ... and she also should not have been expect from Natsuki that she will behave like pet and dutifully wait her at home... and though It is true that Natsuki hid from Shizuru her other, uglier side, but then Shizuru also did not want to know/acknowledge and chose simply not to notice it... Of course, it could have been that she blindly trusted Natsuki, but she was after all very intelligent girl and plus had roughly a basic knowledge of what a vampire is... She did not try to ask Natsuki if she needs a blood to live, from where she takes the clothes, etc. And by how quickly she assumed that it was Nastuki who was responsible for the death of her fiance, I guess, she already for long time had doubts about Natsuki... So she herself preferred not to know the truth. Nevertheless, although I can not really blame Natsuki completely, still what she did - it is unforgivable...
And I guess Shizuru's death kind of fits well into the storyline... life of vampire was not for her, to her it would have been hard to get used to ... and I think she did not want to get used to... and It feels like that Shizuru herself subconsciously wanted to die (because she unduly risked, going outside in the daylight, drawing undue attention to herself), so to some extent she herself brought on herself death...
The only solution to prevent this - it was to go separate ways just after Natsuki had regained her strength... But neither Shizuru nor Natsuki not wanted it ... They did not want to be separated, and let go of each other... and thus continue to play with fire... and took the risk...
Anyway, thanks again for this awesome chapter!... and you got me really intrigued by what will happen next!
| Maow chapter 4 . 9/27/2012
So shizuru isnt a vampire? o.O
| 2koe chapter 4 . 9/27/2012
Love the story but I'll wait no matter how long
as long as you just don't abandon the story
| Leeyou chapter 4 . 9/27/2012
You are so cruel... But I want to know what next!
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/27/2012
that was soooooooo sad . . . . hope you update fast . i wana read the next chap as soon as possible
| Platina GF chapter 4 . 9/27/2012
oh, wow, such a heartbreaking chapter! thank you for the update:)
| Koncept chapter 4 . 9/27/2012
Now I'm curious to what Natsuki will do. Revenge? Anxiously awaiting the next update and I hope the writers block isn't a nuisance for too long.
| qaths10 chapter 3 . 9/24/2012
I like how you were developing the story and the romance that's fine haha
I hope the next chapter
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/22/2012
I love it so much!
Great writing, keep it up please.
| PostoronnimV chapter 3 . 9/22/2012
Omg... Wow, thank you very much for this truly superb chapter!
Hmm, Shizuru is changed ... but I wonder, this changes have more of a physical nature (turning into a vampire) or emotional... Somehow I do not think that Shizuru turns into a vampire... If I remember correctly, Natsuki had already bitten her (pierced through her skin), when Shizuru tried to take Natsuki to her home... So I think it's more emotional nature... changes in their relationship, in themselves... Natsuki showed her other side to Shizuru... more monstrous side, which was hidden... And when the news of the death of her fiance reached her... An earlier Natsuki's action allowed to sow doubts in Shizuru's trust to her and do not truly believe the words of Natsuki...
Anyway, thanks again for this awesomely awesome chapter!... and you got me really intrigued by how events will develop further!