|Reviews for Bleeding the Magic|
| Shannon Dee chapter 2 . 1/21/2014
An interesting beginning.
| ChocolateTeapot chapter 2 . 12/7/2013
This is quite an interesting and well-written story. I really liked Harry's conversation with Cyneath.
| Endfall chapter 2 . 8/12/2013
Annnd I'm hooked!
| The Flying Frog chapter 2 . 5/31/2013
Looks like Harry has found himself among the Tremere, and it's a shame that he is so idealistically...naive to the politicking of the Kindred, especially those of the Tremere clan (my favorite clan to play as in Vampire: The Masquerade Bloodlines, by the way) and their pyramid.
The way I see it, once Harry finishes his work on the Fidelius Charm in the Chantry, one of three things will happen. 1) Harry will be sired into the pyramid of the secretive Tremere with Rebecca as his sire, and will be taught in the powers of Thamaturgy. If this happens, then he won't be allowed outside of the Chantry unless on official Clan business, or should Dumbledore/Voldemort discover their location...even if they can't find the Chantry itself. 2) Harry will be kept prisoner as a Ghoul in the Chantry, and will be called upon to research things as necessary for the clan. He will be nothing more than a tool that is still useful while his masters play Kindred politics. Or finally 3) ...he will simply be killed outright.
The first two options each can provide a lot of story potential, dramatic tension culminating in a thrilling climax as Harry reconnects with the wizarding world in dramatic fashion. The third would be a short story.
| Story Assembler chapter 2 . 2/8/2013
Any plans on updating this? I'm liking what I'm seeing so far.
| corrwin chapter 2 . 12/16/2012
A very intriguing story. Great library, I'd like one like that. And the seeds of doubt have been planted in Harry's mind, so maybe he'll try to regain some control.
I wonder - why Harry? Wouldn't a more experienced wizard be better, if they wanted someone to modify a complex charm? They have a high-schooler finishing a construction of a superfortress 200 years in the making...
And going back to chapter 1, was Harry dying when he first met Rebecca? It would make me feel a little better about the whole situation if he did, but I'm still not entirely comfortable with Ghoul!Harry... that's why we need more chapters to see where the story is going ;)
| Super-Saiyan-3-Vegeta chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
love it. will we find out her name next chapter ?
| yrdfxz chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
A vague, yet very fascinating introduction. And I mean vague in the best way possible. I know nothing of Vampire the Masquerade, but you've got me hooked.
| corrwin chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
Well, yet another story from a brilliant, if a little distracted, author. Do remember to update all your stories from time to time :) This one... starts interesting, but I'll wait and see... and while waiting, I think I'm going to refresh my knowledge of the V:tM universum.
| KafeiDetour chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
Excellent start! I am very interested in reading how this turns out.