Reviews for The Second Coming Of The Yellow Flash
anonymous chapter 8 . 7/4
Cummon gimme an update!
Guest chapter 11 . 6/29
You are truly talented. I hope you will update.
Drakrath chapter 11 . 4/14
Hi there!:) really hope you start writing again! Brilliant story!
agdoom bagdoom chapter 11 . 3/11
it was good to an you are making naruto everyone's takes all the craps from the people he every issue you make naruto not agreeing to ultimately he agrees to he needs money that much he can always hunt missing nin and get do mission for the village he hate.
Guest chapter 11 . 2/12
Please continue this story it is really good
EmeraldNorth chapter 11 . 12/9/2016
Soooo good! Can't wait for the next update xD
Kwood101 chapter 11 . 11/12/2016
like the flow of the story and the build up definitely exciting on a different view so thanks keep up the good work
Axcel chapter 3 . 9/30/2016
For the record, the manga implies that one of A's reasons for overthrowing the previous Raikage was because he is too moral to stand for kidnapping people to essenntially turn into rape-slaves for producing bloodline users. He wouldn't send kidnappers out after Hinata. In fact, the kidnapping attempt on her in canon was the last straw that resulted in A killing the then Raikage.
Guest chapter 11 . 9/22/2016
I'm inordinately pleased that Jiraya's frog stomach summoning actually worked, and on a significant character. Noticed a few typos here and there, but nothing too bad. Like the nuance that you've given Hinata, too many fics have the female character fall in love with their male hero saviour.
AzureSoulReaper chapter 4 . 9/17/2016
i see fights ahead
AzureSoulReaper chapter 3 . 9/16/2016
good chapter
AzureSoulReaper chapter 2 . 9/16/2016
interesting contact
AzureSoulReaper chapter 1 . 9/16/2016
good start
claymore78 chapter 11 . 9/12/2016
You killed off Sakura? Good chapter so far.
Vandar93 chapter 11 . 9/12/2016
I just re read everything because of your AN at the end of this chapter saying Sakura died. I didn't see anything saying she was killed off but you did kill Tenzo so Im hoping it's a typo
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