Reviews for Dorky Teens
ErroneousJuxtaposition chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
I think you did pretty well! I only saw like, 3(?) things in the story that were not englishly (that's probably not even a word) correct, but authors with English as their native tongue typically make those types of mistakes (like: cheerleading squad, not squat) so, really they were very minor things.

Great job! I really enjoyed reading your story!
DramaRat chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
It's really cute I loved it so far. Keep going!
SelenitaLunar chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
Cute story. Loved It.
A very GREAT job with the language. Very Good English.
I wish I hope I could write in English like you do...
Guest chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
Its awesome. I love the plot and the language did not seem to be a problem :)
Trinilynn chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
Cure story loved the little comic moments. As for you English I could not rell that it is not your first language. Good job.