Reviews for Mikan
dannyjae chapter 7 . 5/18/2016
Are you still busy with your college life? Or are you having a writer's block o.o ? chapter 7 . 3/31/2014
FuckingHateNatsu chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
'Princess Leslie Marie Vanessa Louise Roberts' Wow that's just over Slut, i mean who the in the fucking mordern have 'Princess' in their name? if shes you i should say.. Thats just overload Bitch
Aerys-Hime chapter 6 . 8/2/2013
Wow I love this kind of stories! Please update moooore :)
MikanxNatsumexxx chapter 6 . 5/28/2013
Hello ! Please I'm begging you finish the story now . I can't wait what will happen . Please, I just hope that you can finish the story before June just like what you said. Please , My school starts so soon . I'm begging you . I like this story so much this is one of my favourite Story that I had read so please finish the story as early as possible .
Sia chapter 6 . 5/12/2013
Neeeext it's a good one ;)
night liker chapter 5 . 2/20/2013
a few inconsistencies with the tenses here and there...

but it's great that you finally posted (and i finally reviewed, lol)

who are you actually shipping, btw? somehow, as the story goes on, haru x mikan is starting to sound almost as plausible as natsume x mikan, and i know how much you love that ship XD

plow through the writer's block!
ArtsyNinja3 chapter 5 . 1/6/2013
I totally ship Haru and Mikan now. He's so sweet!
night liker chapter 4 . 11/24/2012
haha... lol bai. I think it's kinda funny that Mikan seems to be so romantically unaware of Haru. I suppose she thinks they have sort of a brother-sister relationship? XD

'nyways, you missed some periods here and there, and also put some on periods that should probably be commas. read it over, i think you'll find them.

i said in an earlier review that sometimes i get confused about who's saying what, or who's doing what, but now i think i kinda got used to the style. doesn't confuse me as much.

aja! XD
do your best to finish this :)
Vegie-1526 chapter 4 . 11/22/2012
Nice chapter, but I was shocked that Natsume didn't got frustrated about's Mikan condition.
Shai Moe chapter 4 . 11/21/2012
Please please. not haru and mikan! ToT
your story is heartbreaking! /3
ArtsyNinja3 chapter 4 . 11/20/2012
AWW! I'm totally shipping Mikan and Haru right now
Taiyou no Yume chapter 4 . 11/20/2012
This is really interesting :D please update soon :3
night liker chapter 3 . 11/11/2012
yay! you finally got the new chapter out! :)

i do think this is better than the previous ones, regarding the technical aspect of it. you switched up "has" and "have" somewhere up there, but that's minor... definitely improving :)

now, get the next chapter up! i wanna read it!

as for the pairing... hmm... i don't know... surprise me! XD
rheakayesha.asibal chapter 3 . 11/10/2012
OMG this is awesome. And I think I know who that familiar figure is...its...'Natsume'. And also about Mikan pairing up I still don't know but I like the idea that Natsume is jealous because its giving me a fuzzy feeling. Anyway thank for updating this story and I hope you can update more. BTW can you mention me in the next chapter go by the name Rhea Kayesha cause I'm curious
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