|Reviews for I Live|
| MissBookQueen chapter 1 . 3/12
Stunning storytelling ! Have re-read the story 3 time alredy and am waiting nicely for more :)
| jkj61110 chapter 57 . 3/9
Great story! I love it and hope you continue with it soon!
| happyghost chapter 34 . 3/7
So, this was written about a year ago, and because of my "lurking skills" I get to review now :)
I totally owe you some more reviews BTW.
How many times was Jasper thinking or saying how much he loved and cared for Bella in this chapter? . . . The whole time. The entire chapter. Everything he was thinking and doing was for her welfare, to teach her, to keep her safe. . . at any cost.
Does he do everything in the best, right way? No. Like an angry parent he lashes out. They have conflict between each other. They fight. They have words. He restrains her.
None of the reviews say Bella is bad for biting and pulling Jasper's hair. . . I wonder why?
Isn't that bad behavior?
Oh, but we shall forgive her, she is a newborn vampire.
We expect this sort of behavior . . . it's the newborn's nature.
And Jasper? His behavior? His dominant aggressive behavior? Shall we forgive him for that? Shall we forgive him for his thoughts?
I think we shall. . . It was how he was "raised". It is what he knows.
How many times did Edward want to kill human Bella? Take her life and drain her blood? How many times did he realize that he was a monster?
But we can forgive him . . . it is his nature . . .
Vampires aren't humans with sparkly skin. They have different instincts, and cultures, and ways to be.
Jasper could never hurt Bella, he was having errant thoughts.
Anyone who is honest with themselves can know that thoughts don't equal actions. How many times have you thought about killing or hurting someone? It doesn't make you a killer.
Edward killed humans back in his rebellious stage . . . he chose them based on their thoughts. How many innocent people must he have killed?
Oh, but it's OK for vampires to kill humans . . . right? Even the "good" ones.
This chapter had a lot of emotion and tension in it.
I think it was very well written and explores vampire nature and upbringing in many different contexts.
Nobody is perfect here. I think Jasper and Bella have had a spat and they will forgive each other, and hopefully forgive themselves as well. It is often times harder to forgive yourself, for some reason.
| Guest chapter 34 . 3/5
Did you get off on writing a Jasper forces Bella into submission scene? Is that why you did it? You're sick. Are you proud of this crap? So much for equality in a relationship. She should just rip his head off and get the hell out of there if he can't treat her any better than that and has to go around being the boss of her just to stroke his own ego. Nasty. I had thought you were a better writer than this.
| Guest chapter 34 . 3/5
I liked this story until you turned Jasper into a fucking asshole. I'm going to find something better to read.
| acetwolf94 chapter 57 . 2/23
I LOVE IT! NICE! ADD MORE!
| meohmya420 chapter 56 . 2/23
Hi again, so this is really for chap 57 but you can only review once per chap so..thanks for the preview of chap 58, I wanted to re-review because I was just so tired the first time I couldn't say all I wanted too. So I really like the plot you have going on, and I think you have a great pace with the story, nothing drags but you don't over describe so yay. I love jasper stories but I think some make him too soft with what he's been through so I appreciate that yours is realistic in that aspect.. Or as realistic as vampire stories goes lol. I am so interested now that Aro is here and I'm rambling but I hope you can tell I love your story. :)
| cela chapter 15 . 2/23
"feedin', fightin' and fuckin' " came from pam on "true blood" season four when "queen bill" had eric (who had been cursed by a witch and couldn't remember anything of hi previous life) were talking while locked in bill's dungeon.
| meohmya420 chapter 57 . 2/23
Hi I love your story, Jasper is my favorite character. Cant wait to see an update! :)
| Caitie126 chapter 57 . 2/18
OMG update again soon, please!
| dedred4584 chapter 57 . 2/18
good work I await the next updates
| ded1 chapter 57 . 2/17
I love this story. I hope you are able to update soon. Take care.
| lostnerd chapter 57 . 2/11
I can't wait for your next update! as always you're an awesome writer!
| Guest chapter 15 . 2/9
OMG YOU LIKE FIREFLY TOO!I LOVE YOU SO MUCH! THATS LIKE MY FAVORITE SHOW EVER I CAN BEIEVE IT AND YOU QUOTED IT! IF ONLY I COULD MEET PEOPLE LIKE YOU IN REAL LIFE OMG! -vssl
| Mischief101 chapter 57 . 2/7
So good. I'm a little sad, it seems like it might soon be the end. I don't want it to end. I want to know how it went in Alaska. What were the Cullen's reactions? Was Marcus bound by Chelsea? If so what is his reaction to her death?