Reviews for A normal day, I thought
Mikina-Love-Star chapter 23 . 2/10/2014
VERY GLAD chapter 22 wasn't the real ending otherwise I would have cried for the rest of my life!

GREAT ENDINGGGGGGGG! *fireworks go off* That was really a great story *clapping while crying*
FlowerOfTheStars chapter 23 . 2/5/2014
Forget everything I said in the last review! I love you! This is probably the best ending ever!

You made it seem like she had died but in reality in the last chapter you TOTALLY hinted that she was going to come back, the title was a dead give away!

This is truly the best ending for this story! Thanks for everything author-san! I will respect forever and if you write another story I will surely read it! :D
Digidestined10 chapter 22 . 11/25/2013
Please let this not be the end!
cherry chapter 22 . 11/23/2013
Quiet a disappointing ending, but it's great, no one would have guess this, inpredictable
serenityshields chapter 22 . 11/23/2013
i never *sniff* ever thought *sniff*it would end this WAY ! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCC CCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII IIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

*SNIFF* i'll get over it soon

always broken-hearted,
serenityshields
FlowerOfTheStars chapter 22 . 11/24/2013
What do you mean by 'final chapter'? This CAN'T be the end. You CAN'T kill the main protagonist! YOU CAN'T MAKE ME DROWN IN MY FEELS!

That's it! I am going on a feeltrip to Heaven! I will get Lucinda back myself!

Don't read what I'm going to write next okay? Okay? OKAY? OKAY? O-K-A-Y?

LUCINDA! NOOO! THIS CAN'T BEEEE! WHY?! NOO! MY FEELINGS! SHADE'S FEELINGS! EVERYONE'S FEEELINGGGSSSS! WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY?!

Okay.. I feel better.. I think.. I hope... I need something to get over this...

Thanks for all the hard work author. Don't worry I won't hunt you down or write your name in my Death Note or curse you for the rest of my life or wish for your dismiss or ANY OTHER BAD THING TO HAPPEN TO YOU!

I LOVE THIS STORY! You are the one that created it... so... I RESPECT YOU! THANK YOU!
Random fan chapter 21 . 11/15/2013
This chapter so exciting! Continue writing!
serena shields chapter 21 . 11/14/2013
oh em gee that was freaking awesome and romantic of shade saving lucinda heheheheheehe i CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!
FlowerOfTheStars chapter 21 . 11/15/2013
The story is getting more and more exciting as it continues.

And romantic! I feel that you are trying to tell us that even if they are 12-year-olds it doesn't mean that they can experience true love, anyone can!

Continue like this! And let us fans read how they will save Lucinda and have a happy ending.
LoveInTheBattleField chapter 21 . 11/12/2013
On and on, keep it coming
Digidestined10 chapter 21 . 11/12/2013
Please update soon!
Mikina-Love-Star chapter 20 . 11/12/2013
You are a total sadist! How can you make a little kid suffer like that?!

I don't love you as much as I did before!

LUCINDA! *hugs the chibi version*

UPDATE! This surely is not the ending of the story right?! RIGHT?!
lollipop900 chapter 20 . 11/6/2013
oh my. sob sob WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHH! so sad!
Digidestined10 chapter 20 . 11/6/2013
Please add another chapter, I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
LoveInTheBattleField chapter 20 . 11/6/2013
Great chapter, keep it coming.
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