|Reviews for fils céleste|
| lovewar66 chapter 4 . 3/3/2013
Who ever said that to you needs to go stuff it (with a blade). Your writing is perfect.
| LoopyToucan chapter 2 . 2/7/2013
There is close to NO capitalization. You need to capitalize the first letter of a sentence! But, keep trying, even though you probably won't, since you haven't updated in FOREVER!
| LoopyToucan chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
Too many typos/spelling errors, and WAY too short, but interesting plot line. You just need to capitalize on it. Try to get a beta who can proofread your work. It will be so much better.
| Angst-BuriTTo chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
me likey my story