Reviews for Everybody Talks
anonymous chapter 1 . 11/26/2016
I enjoy it, but the POV confuses me slightly. An example being in chapter two, where Fiona enters Sweet and Sour and is found my ML and something along the lines of "He was actually watching the door waiting for me" now if where to say that in 3rd person POV, it would be understandable, but it seems to be written from Fiona's POV, so it's rather odd to read. Kinda makes it seem as if she's reading his mind or something xD
But overall - it's enjoyable. Normally I don't read anything in this kind of format, but I'm enjoying the overall idea of this, so kudos to you

PS sorry if I seem rude, just offering some advice •v•
Deadshadow chapter 14 . 7/13/2016
Cool! I love it. Would you do another chapter or so on the kids lives? It would be cool if you could.
Guest chapter 14 . 5/15/2016
From a simple idea to a beautiful masterpiece, wow just wow. :')
Guest chapter 4 . 3/10/2016
I like this fanfiction so much i don't know why i Think it's because it makes Me laugh
Guest chapter 14 . 12/23/2015
Oh my glob you ended I'm gonna dieeee noooooooooo
Guest chapter 14 . 12/23/2015
Soo good I Frick in loved it
marshallleekenoingtonabadeervk chapter 14 . 9/3/2015
Awsome
Rainpelt The Doctor chapter 13 . 8/2/2015
Welp. There goes the human race. Never like it any... Wait. Isn't the Ice King/Queen still technically a human... Dun. Dun. DUUUUNNNN.
lena chapter 14 . 5/28/2015
Beautiful story I usually review at the end please keep the story going
RIO chapter 14 . 4/8/2015
So I can't remember if I made a coment last time I read this story so I will now I was arealy good story and î hope u have made more
Guest chapter 14 . 3/7/2015
I think u should write more to the story it was amazing!
Guest chapter 14 . 1/3/2015
Love it please write more
Guest chapter 13 . 12/27/2014
i hate you i fucking hate you why the hell did you stop*crying *this was beautiful just bravo bravo
fioleelover01 chapter 14 . 12/5/2014
I love this story please write more
MagiJay chapter 6 . 12/2/2014
DRAMA BOMB
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