I love it so much. The way you made them a team. Sasuke clearly care about them and subtly gewohnt and showing that is so well written

Such a crash hitting the end of a long fic when you’re enjoying it.

Argh, Sakura keeps missing the “I do seals” bit with jiraiya…

Wow what a tale! I hope you update this at some point. Thank you for sharing your work!

“ One of her legs are bandaged,'” is

Minor typos: “ had lead ”should be had led
“Hammer-handedly” should be “ham-handedly”

The spar is interesting for that O-hisa marks them as Konohan.
“ suffix to her name” prefix, not suffix; suffixes are the affixes that go after names.

“Requesting a private briefing”
That should be a debriefing; briefings precede missions; debriefings follow them.

Minor typo: “Their was” should be “There was”

“ almost never use or ponder the RL knowledge/things they loved.” At least nowadays it’s reasonably common for reincarnates/SIs to wholesale plagiarize the “unknown” works for their own benefit.

They tend to ignore the difficulties inherent in recollection and translation, though,so kudos there.

I was told the intros bust a gut in the reader. Pretty accurate.

We are still here, don’t worry. This story is far too amazing to drop. I can’t wait to see the next chapter.

I think this is an amazing chapter.

The third getting rightfully yelled at over this is going to be a spicy conversation.

Se casar, ou aceitar se vincular a um clã é a maior burrada que ela pode cometer. Espero que ela não aceite ou faça isso.

NOOOOO YOU CANT END IT LIKE IT COME BACKKKK