|Reviews for Effloresco Secundus|
| hermineG chapter 34 . 11/29
I love it so much. The way you made them a team. Sasuke clearly care about them and subtly gewohnt and showing that is so well written
| Guest chapter 34 . 11/23
Such a crash hitting the end of a long fic when you’re enjoying it.
| Guest chapter 26 . 11/21
Argh, Sakura keeps missing the “I do seals” bit with jiraiya…
| deltamu chapter 34 . 11/20
Wow what a tale! I hope you update this at some point. Thank you for sharing your work!
| Guest chapter 14 . 11/19
“ One of her legs are bandaged,'” is
| Guest chapter 13 . 11/19
Minor typos: “ had lead ”should be had led
“Hammer-handedly” should be “ham-handedly”
| Guest chapter 8 . 11/19
The spar is interesting for that O-hisa marks them as Konohan.
“ suffix to her name” prefix, not suffix; suffixes are the affixes that go after names.
| Guest chapter 7 . 11/19
“Requesting a private briefing”
That should be a debriefing; briefings precede missions; debriefings follow them.
| Guest chapter 6 . 11/19
Minor typo: “Their was” should be “There was”
| Guest chapter 4 . 11/19
“ almost never use or ponder the RL knowledge/things they loved.” At least nowadays it’s reasonably common for reincarnates/SIs to wholesale plagiarize the “unknown” works for their own benefit.
They tend to ignore the difficulties inherent in recollection and translation, though,so kudos there.
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/19
I was told the intros bust a gut in the reader. Pretty accurate.
| Crys chapter 34 . 11/14
We are still here, don’t worry. This story is far too amazing to drop. I can’t wait to see the next chapter.
| Icha Icha Ichiraku chapter 17 . 11/12
I think this is an amazing chapter.
The third getting rightfully yelled at over this is going to be a spicy conversation.
| imileide chapter 32 . 11/3
Se casar, ou aceitar se vincular a um clã é a maior burrada que ela pode cometer. Espero que ela não aceite ou faça isso.
| idyllic123 chapter 34 . 10/11
NOOOOO YOU CANT END IT LIKE IT COME BACKKKK