Reviews for Effloresco Secundus
Shinkicker chapter 23 . 5/23
Awesome! Great fights by all.

Thanks for posting.
Amberwish chapter 23 . 5/23
Konohamaya Uzumaki chapter 23 . 5/23
I really likes Sakura and Shikamaru's fight. It was pretty realistic since Sakura can't always rely on her magic especially against someone who isn't an enemy. I also liked how it screamed 'friendly match' since you could tell they were both going easy on each other and not going for any killing blows so it was a really sweet fight. Although i may be a bit biased since i'm a huge Shikamaru fan
rorororororororororo chapter 23 . 5/23
Sakura vs Shikamaru - epic fight. You nailed this chapter!
L.Soul chapter 23 . 5/23
I've got to say I very much enjoyed the show. It was amazing.. My favorite was Sakura's obviously. Those tactics against Shikamaru.. and well, the slight jealousy she feels for naruto and Sauske makes her more likeable too. I would feel it too if I were her, and dislike the fact that i feel that jealousy. Now will you write a scene of sakura playing shoji with the nara's? I loved everything. !
CharmedbyFire chapter 23 . 5/22
Sakura and shikamaru's fight was brilliant! I felt like I was right in the middle of the battle, and it was believable how everything panned out. also I wonder what's up with sakura's mo escape, so creepy. Maybe her magic is keeping the seal at bay.
Fandoulli chapter 23 . 5/22
This is awesome! Sakura's mindscape is fairly worrying but the fight against Shikamaru was fantastic! And really elaborate! I liked the falling flash tags idea and I'm probably imagining it to look a lot prettier than it should. Also, good work with all the signs of an upcoming fight. I love how observant everyone is in this fic - as you'd expect of shinobi. Thanks!
svetlana35 chapter 23 . 5/22
Чудесно. Фонарик?Спасибо.
hansolo18 chapter 23 . 5/22
Delightful chapter. Fun and amusing to see how you made the matches your own. I can't wait for the next installment.
Guest chapter 23 . 5/22
Awesome fight!
Guest chapter 23 . 5/22
I love it.
Next, please.
fanfic addict o.0 chapter 23 . 5/22

I have been a follower of this fantastic story for a while, and it's been absolutely amazing till the last letter. But y'all know that sometimes you just want to keep reading on right?


GET HIGH AS FUCK AND SPEND THE REST OF YOUR NIGHT READING THIS STORY AGAING FROM CHAPTER ONE ON FORWARD! IT WIL BE THE BEST SLEEPLESS NIGHT YOU'LL EVER HAVE! diclaver, kidos please don't use or abuse illigilal substance in you are not in the right place or country, drugs can be dangerous, be save, thank your for reading my whole rambling disclamer.

so you, just a suggestion you know, I obvious would never do something like that myself. Anyway, I'm gonna drink some coffee now and get some homework done.

Good night from the Netherlands
Guest chapter 23 . 5/22
This chapter was gorgeous. Just wonderful. Loved the Shikamaru and Sakura fight.
Kel chapter 23 . 5/22
The flashlight was brilliant!

Seriously. So perfect, and I've not seen anyone use one against the Nara before, but it would be exactly the right secret weapon. Excellent fight descriptions.
Suzululu4moe chapter 23 . 5/22
irony is that the “demon-child” wants to introduce a priest to them. its amazing the priest actually was willing to talk to the demon vessel.

lol naruto digging his own hole. lol sex ed is probably the only health class he’d pass…. well jiraiya would be proud that his godson at least knows about it.

glad that naruto is losing his naivety but is still shining bright as a star.

! without his porn, if it were any other story id say kakashi is having withdrawal symptoms from lack of porn. oh oh…. ominous…..

irony is as a shinobi clan kid, Ino is technically born for this. the only ones that aren’t born for it would be sakura, lee and tenten.

the flashlight is brilliant. i don’t think I’ve seen a flash light vs nara before at all.
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