Reviews for Effloresco Secundus
Utrix chapter 24 . 6/19
This is good
Amonamon chapter 24 . 6/19
Uhm... did ovaries get stolen or something? Some are thinking Orochimaru is gonna use them, but this seems like it could have even worse effects. He could just take some DNA and try to implant her magic into others. This sounds more like he wants to end magic. No kids from Sakura/Hermione, no more magic in their world.
ByLanternLight chapter 24 . 6/19
Did Kaburo just pull out her ovaries so he could later manufacture children with her "bloodline?" That's terrifying.
phoebe turner chapter 24 . 6/19
Great chapter!
MoonWatersLight chapter 24 . 6/19
I'm sorry you have been going through a rough time. I still thoroughly enjoyed this story you know. Amazing! I can't get enough! I blame you for hooking me onto this story and having me on edge waiting for the next chapter and for what happens next. Heck, you don't even need cliff hangers to keep my attention. I hope life treats you as kind as it can and that you update when you can!
Nyght elf chapter 24 . 6/19
I WONDER IF REAL SAKURA WILL BECOME HER INNER NOW? an intense chapter, hopefully she will be all right. she has to be. thx for updating cool chapter!
Goldregen chapter 24 . 6/19
I really loved all the drama in this chapter :) Thank you for sharing!
Monoji chapter 24 . 6/19
DarkArmor .. I kinda agree with you. Kabuto must of stolen one of her ovaries. I'm guess Orochimaru is gonna try and create a new vessel from scratch and possible adapted the new magic bloodline into the shinobi world..
alice chapter 24 . 6/19
vivement la suite
Guest chapter 24 . 6/19
Hermione's magic is obviously way more powerful than inner Sakura, so I'm relieved for now that the girl is going to stay locked up, but I'm dreading any chance of her taking over. Even though inner Sakura has seemed nothing like her canon counterpart, Hermione is a lot more interesting/competent/generally more awesome than Sakura has ever been/could ever be, so I really really don't want to see Sakura at all.

Great chapter though.
Mureena chapter 24 . 6/19
This is good stuff. If you keep the quality level like this you only get thumbs up's from me. If you have to delay chapters because other reasons that is fine too. One only goes mad by following some silly schedule when it comes to writing. That's what's my opinion at least...
Elased chapter 24 . 6/19
The start of this chapter had me tricked completely. I was rejoicing over Hermione's apparent craddle-robbing the seventeen year old, and everything went fifty shades of wrong and how do you make it so that each chapter felt like the best you've written yet? Team seven and Neji's combination to down a jounin was incredible, Hermione's magic lashing out is always a sight for sore eyes, and this time in front of Kakashi and Naruto too.

You've officially reached the part of manga where I stopped reading, but I don't think I'm anywhere near enough of your version of Naruto yet.
KyuubiNoPuma chapter 24 . 6/19
And the plot thickens...
theodora.pyrene chapter 24 . 6/19
Wow. I'm so creeped out by Sakura behind the pink door...
gunnsmoke chapter 24 . 6/19
excellent writing. good divergence from canon.
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