Reviews for Cake
Raven's twimom chapter 1 . 2/14
Loved it. Are you going to write more if these 3? Love to see it turn into a poly fic with a hea for all 3. Thanks for writing.
MiccaF chapter 1 . 11/16/2014
Excellent!
jupiter2005 chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
i enjoyed this, would be awesome to see how things went after that night and to see if they ever got together like that again or if jasper and bella stayed together and edward found a new girlfriend. keep up the good work
Judyblue95 chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
well that certainly was hot. i liked reading this A LOT!
glitterr chapter 1 . 3/28/2014
Beautiful! So sexy and sensual, and the layers of emotional connections made it perfect.
Nrbl1 chapter 1 . 2/17/2014
Wow! That's my #1 fantasy..I hope when it does finally happen will be something similar ..
Beans827 chapter 1 . 1/17/2014
Yowsa! That was smokin' hot! Thanks for sharing that.
Pa Trizia 88 chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
wow... just .. wow ... my cheeks are red, hot and I'm bothered to no end. But, at the same time, my heart hurts and I want more of that story...
I feel like there could be more in regards of their relationship involving Edward.
Im lovesick and seeing that you released this story over a year ago and have not added to it , or another story for that matter, makes me sad.
TgbMcCray pointed this story out to us and was also wondering ,why it had so little reviews... and I wonder the same thing ..
Maybe you could find it in you to continue the story ... It would be worth it.
Also I'd like to point out, that usually I am not a slash/threesome seeker per se,
but the combination of true emotions towards two men and an experience like this, surrounded with a good little setting and very well written ,like yours is,
keeps me very interested and entertained , to say the least
Is there anything else that you have written? Maybe under another name ? I would like to read more of what you got
dpennell007 chapter 1 . 1/10/2014
Wow that was so good! All that in the back of the cab - smoking hot. Between the emotional feelings for what she once had with Edward, the current safety of Jasper's love, and the taboo aspect of what they were all doing - you had it ALL going on.

Great one shot! It really could go in so many directions if continued.
vvv chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
OH MY GOD! pleaseeeee! continue the story/ i love it!
naughtynati chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
That was unbelievable HOT!
harleys chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
So damn hot!
lee21761 chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
That right there was so hot! Gotta go take a cold shower! loved it!
rn aggie chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
This story is amazing!
eternallyedward chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
Loved this-so well-written, and the entire situation seemed plausible. And off the charts hot;) Any chance you'll be continuing it? Bella is so conflicted-I'd love to read more and see how everything would turn ouPr
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