Reviews for Subtitles
Razer Athane chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
The psychological elements in this were fantastic; and your voice for Hal in particular is spot on. Loved it, loved it, loved it!
Cameron chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
OH MY GOD I LOVE IT
Alice chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
This was AMAZING! Wow. You are such a great writer :) I always thought Hal did fancy Alex quite a lot though.. threesome? haha
Pureblood.Heartless chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
This is amazing; absolutely beautiful characterisation and description.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
This is amazing.
Ruby Rosetta Red chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
Perfect character portrayal of Hal as always. I love how you write his inner voice, his thoughts, especially the scene in the park when he spies the jogger. Spine chilling, scary and just perfect.
AngelicMermaid chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
this doesnt seem complete. please write some more its good :D