Reviews for Poor Hayate
lazetta croft chapter 1 . 2/12/2017
I just loooooooove ...the narrarator.
osaka chapter 1 . 1/19/2015
horrible. i can't beleive you didn't give hayate x nagi fanfics.( but it was humorous)
Guest chapter 1 . 10/21/2014
i laugh hard
EagleTsubasa chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
Noooo! Hayate!
steferstheawesome chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
hahahha really funny
Flare Region chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
LMFAO! This was hilarious! You sir, have written pure comedy.
never-endingFantasy chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
Thanks for the gift-fic :D

The whole story was hilarious, especially the narrator's random appearance.
I also liked the whole "This is just a dream" and it turned out to be real.

The story's great, maybe you should try writing more humor.

Thanks again for the gift-fic!
Polodo chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
Very funny! The first part of the story had me cracking up, although it reminded me heavily of one of the earlier manga chapters when Hayate got sick and Nagi (just like here) tried to make a soup to make him better.

The ending though, I also loved, as it threw away my predictions out the window. The random cut to the narrator threw me off, but it wasn't bad.

And, of course, the 'it was all a dream' thing. I've found myself not liking that ending, but when you pulled it actually happening in real life, I was laughing hard all over again.

So great story! Thank you for writing this!