|Reviews for Thee Underground|
| DreamsofDeathandRoses chapter 3 . 5/31/2015
"thee" means in the most basic terms means "you"
So the title of this fic means "you underground"
I feel like that wasnt intentional and you choose the title bc you thought it sounded good
| death-skythe chapter 14 . 9/24/2014
Is it 102% or 120% ?
| death-skythe chapter 11 . 9/24/2014
I predicted it! *beams in pride* But i thought soul was gonna rape maka... :-[ *looks down in shame*
| death-skythe chapter 4 . 9/24/2014
I agree with you mister or misses BA Om. Its true, he does sound like an idiot. Please dont kill me! *hides in corner and covers head with arms*
| kiwicatt chapter 2 . 8/3/2014
Kinda reminds me of the mortal instruments! I love already this story! Can't wait for more! Keep writing!
| SoMa4386 chapter 7 . 7/9/2014
Knew it was from Taken. Love that movie.
| Guest chapter 31 . 6/10/2014
Omg! I love this. I read this in 1 day... :) it was so good. Do I hear a sequel?
| Shadowed Sword chapter 31 . 6/8/2014
Lovely. Just perfect. :) great story please write more. I'm too lazy too log in though hahahaha
| Guest chapter 5 . 2/24/2014
. . . Soul's dad is really Maka's dad? What? Y'know, I'll just shut up and continue reading.
| AngelFromTheLost chapter 31 . 7/7/2013
I know I am also suddenly very lonely and depressed... *sigh* oh well... anywhoo...GREAT STORY 2 THUMBS UP! (I would give you 10 but the thing is... I don't have that many thumbs... 0_0 ) I LOVED IT! FROM BEGINNING TO END! LUV YA BRAVO! KEEP WRITTING XD
| scorpioneldar chapter 17 . 5/28/2013
so your really starting to lose me. are things happening off screen that i am unaware of? and maka seems to suddenly change from one person to another at random
when did she develop her maka chop and dislike of men in this story i see she has them but in this story she did not grow up with her dad nor did he cheat (at least that we know of) on her mom which created both in the original soul eater
it seems like you got on a track of character development (which was going quite well) then suddenly realized that you had left out part of cannon maka's character (parts that do not fit with the story you have told and make sense to leave out i might add) and added it in nearly at random
you do this with soul a little to not as much and not as noticeable though
the rest all keep consistent in your story though
pretty well written story with a great concept (DWMA driven underground) and interesting characters but the last few chapters keep referencing things i have not read (like maka kissing soul?) and adding in random elements from the show or some other place i cant tell
nice job with the madness prelude to the kishin attack to
| Robastar34 chapter 31 . 4/1/2013
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| The Chimp Pit chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
Most intriguing opening to a story.
You've captured my attention; so I'll read on. :)
| ihasanewACCOUNT chapter 31 . 2/6/2013
Maybe the best SoulEater fanfic I ever read! Glad I did and even with the last closeting chapter I wish it had not ended when it did! :( but it is and always will be awesome. JUST LIKE THOSE AMAZIBG POEMS! Omg they are like flipping awesome too! XD