Reviews for An Incomplete Potter Collection |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Magica and Potter... glorious. |
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![]() ![]() love it. |
![]() ![]() I love the golden rulers idea, about creating an Atlantis! I love that Hermione is the instigator, and it's justice and revenge driven- I know you said these are shorts and incomplete, but if you ever did more work on this one (or any, really), I would be the first to read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was good! same things happened, but not in a 'forced' way. (and with any 'change' accounted for) I also liked that the 'third year' challenge was (or at least appeared to be) the 'ending' of rampant bullying at the school. the TWT was still a mess, but it is very hard to make it anything but. however Harry's way around the issue of 'zombie Voldemort' was genius, as was your quiet way of 'resolving that' (so it didn't overshadow the following year). Very much read like a 'teen romance' novel toward the end, but that worked far better than the 'mess' we got. GOOD JOB |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just read this - in case you don't know, there's a very long British Intelligence / Hogwarts AU, Hermione Granger and the Boy Who Lived, by Diane Castle on Twisting the Hellmouth. It's part of a multi-crossover superhero series but it works pretty well as a stand-alone story since it's a prelude to the series that doesn't get into the crossovers. Warning - it's over 600K words, and the series as a whole is several million words so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Just wow! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a very nice and somehow special chapter to end on. Completely understandable why you wanted to call it quits. Thank you still |
![]() ![]() ![]() What would have really helped all the heart break and hurt feelings would have been to sit down and have a mature conversation and actually explain things to Harry before he left. In my opinion it's mostly on them for not explaining. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your vignette "Introduction Ron" is PERFECT. Really, short as it is, that one deserves to be given a story posting of its own! |
![]() ![]() bonne fic! |
![]() ![]() It's okay if you ruin Rowling's plots. They're stupid anyway. |
![]() ![]() My god, I need a complete fic of this. But with actual displays of Harry's violence and paranoia. Harry Dursley...lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked Harry and the Dragon |