|Reviews for Rainbow|
| thingstogoandplacestodo chapter 7 . 5/6
it's 4 in the morning and i don't have the words to properly express what this story means to me but basically it's beautiful and reading your molly and lily and lucy felt more like reading the story of my life than anything i have ever read and you are an amazing outstanding writer, i wish i could write half as well as you do. i love your lovely phrases and flowing imagery and incredible characters and just... wow
| Anastasia Tremaine chapter 4 . 3/12
'They're all freaks in their own way, ever since Daddy got chucked in that cupboard.' I adore this line. Too many fanfictions gloss over how Harry's upbringing would affect his children and I think you really sum it up perfectly. How did you learn to write like this, it makes the reader feel so involved, flying through the protagonist's life in a whirl of words and colours and it's succinct enough so as not to bore the reader yet detailed enough that you feel as though you know Lily. I love how you didn't make the Weasley family the epitome of perfection, instead highlighting their flaws and inadequacies and you made them human. This is absolutely incredible (I must admit I've read this story a disturbing amount of times) and I cannot wait until you install the final chapter. The story of Dominique Weasley, the Squib.
| A person chapter 7 . 2/18
I shot you. And amazing fic.
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/10/2015
Oh My Ford, I love this story so much. It is brilliantly written and interesting and the problems they have are so relatable. Where did you learn to write like this? Please finish the story. And if you have time write a story about those who followed their intended paths and got sorted into Gryffindor (And explain why James ran away and Fred disappeared and what happened to Rose and Victoire) I love this story, it's so effortlessly brilliant xxx
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/12/2015
This was insanely amazingly brilliant. I'm almost embarrassed to admit I've read all 163 of the fanfictions you've written. I love your style of writing, it's abstract and thought provoking and different and I absolutely adore it. I really hope you finish this soon and write more because your writing is just incredible and I know I'm rambling on a bit but I can't help it. Please write more xxx
| TheWeasleyWitch chapter 7 . 9/2/2015
Wow. This was absolutely incredible to read. Please finish it, I can't wait to read the chapter written on Dom (will it explain the feud between James and his family in more detail?). Will you be planning to write a follow on story about the five who choose to tread in their ancestors footsteps and follow the path that was intended for them, donning robes of red and gold
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/2/2015
Dominique's the squib as she's the only next generation Weasley who's house isn't mentioned
Teddy (although he doesn't really count) - Gryffindor
Victoire - Gryffindor
Louis - Ravenclaw
Molly - Ravenclaw
Lucy - Slytherin
Roxanne - Hufflepuff
Fred II - Gryffindor
Rose - Gryffindor
Hugo - Hufflepuff
James - Gryffindor
Albus - Slytherin
Lily - Slytherin
All the other children have been accounted for. Louis makes it clear that Dominique is alive (in Paris) and it makes sense in a weird way that Fleur went insane because her daughter was a squib and she couldn't accept it. Also it makes sense why almost all of the kids were scared they wouldn't get the letter, they had already had a cousin who didn't
Great story, please finish it. It's my favourite story of this type xxxx
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/27/2015
This is about the twentieth time I've read this story and I love it so much. The characters were so well portrayed and you made them really relatable. I adore the line Lily says about them all being freaks ever since Harry was thrown in the cupboard. Pretty much every other story shows the next generation as having the perfect lives and the perfect worlds and the perfect marriages, I really love how you showed that they ended up just as messed up as the previous generation. Truly astounding writing
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/27/2015
Dominique's the squib isn't she. The only two people who's houses haven't been mentioned are Dominique and Rose. And Rose is dating Scorpius while at Hogwarts during the school year so the squib must be Dominique. Is that why Fleur went mad?
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/9/2015
Are you going to write a story about the ones who wore Gryffindor gold and were just as fucked up as those who didn't?
| Gitana del Sol chapter 1 . 2/25/2015
Oh, this is *fabulous*! I don't generally read next gen because so many writers cast a sort of glittering, happy-go-lucky sheen over all of them, but Molly felt so *real* here. I love your writing, absolutely fantastic. I am so glad I read this; it was posted on the Harry Potter Challenge Forum and I just followed the link.
| AdventuresInTheSueniverse chapter 7 . 12/7/2014
SO AWESOME! Please update this, I need more!
| Captain Grin chapter 7 . 10/30/2014
But what about the one who wasn't sorted at all? *rolls around*
| Captain Grin chapter 1 . 10/30/2014
I absolutely loved these chapters. I've read them several times and I adore them so much.
| foodluver chapter 7 . 10/29/2014
You should update! BECAUSE THIS IS SO GOOD AND IT SUCKED ME IN SO PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE