Reviews for Rainbow
eleventy7 chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
I absolutely loved this. I was very suspicious about it — next-gen characters afford writers quite a bit of leeway with characterisation and the results can be very mixed — but you've done an amazing balancing act. Just enough quirkiness — little details here and there, with each character marching through their teenage angst parade — but the drama never drags the story down. The faults and shortcomings of the characters are very carefully set against the backdrop of adolescence — identities are worn and discarded like costumes, insecurity eats away at childhood dreams, and relationships constantly merge and dissolve. Consequently, the characters become bittersweetly relatable — their weaknesses never becoming irritating or exasperating.

The only criticism I might offer is in regard to Louis's storyline — there's a part where, during his first year at Hogwarts, he remembers — when he was 'little' — being taken to a Muggle doctor who suggested he had schizophrenia. Most people with schizophrenia are usually diagnosed in their 20s, although onset can occur as early as 16 years old. It's extremely rare to have symptoms preceding the adolescent years, and the youngest possible age is generally around 10 years old.

Anyway, medical missteps aside, I hope one day you return to post the final chapter. I'm not sure which Weasley will be the one who never gets Sorted...I wonder if it's not that they're a Squib, but maybe that they died before receiving their Hogwarts letter?

Looking forward to the final chapter, if you ever complete the fic, and congratulations on your amazing writing.
FirePhoenix97 chapter 7 . 6/27/2014
This was unique and though I disliked the break-ups of two of my favourite pairings - Harry/Ginny and Rose/Scorpious, I found it incredibly interesting.

Cheers, our dancing days,
XXXXXX
FirePhoenix97
NiceSlytherin chapter 7 . 3/30/2014
You have a great style! Awesome awesome.
Queen Frufalumps chapter 1 . 3/4/2014
And I think this is the best thing I've seen. I started reading it on Archive of our own, and now I really want more. I'm dying. I wanna know who the muggleborn is...but it's unclear. I think it's James, but he went to Hogwarts, but he's the one who has a scandal.
Queen Frufalumps chapter 7 . 3/4/2014
Honnnnnnnnnnnnney, I love the character analysis so much,
suzuyas chapter 7 . 2/22/2014
ah i loved this and id leave a longer review but im on a phone but ill end with faving this!
A Kitten for Padfoot chapter 7 . 11/26/2013
love this story so much. gorgeous and sad and real at the same time. so different from dear fanfiction
Kat0898 chapter 7 . 11/1/2013
Hey! I've been reading these, starting last night when I was supposed to be doing homework, and now they're over but not really. So, do you intend to finish this? Please intend to finish this!
DobbyLovesSocks chapter 7 . 10/5/2013
caaaaaaaaaaaaazzzzzAAAAAA
cassie omg i'm sorry this review is so darn late but god i forgot how painful this story is like do you just love making everything and everyone die or at least as depressed as humanly possible?

just that trait means you're well on your way to success ;)

no but seriously this was incREDIBLE as usual. You write so that every word is thought out, every phrase has another meaning, and it's gorgeous.

[Everything is too much and not enough and she is in a constant state of contradictions.] I swear I related to that line so much... it love how you can always put people's thoughts into words when i've felt the exact same way with no clue how to explain it.

And you gave Lucy a happy ending. :D I remember you saying you wanted her to be ace... oh yeah. And I love how you showed that she could still be successful without portraying society's view of successful. This was so amazing, Cassie, I can't wait for the final installment. :) (eXCEPT THAT WILL MEAN IT'S OVER AND SOB)
NewSlove chapter 7 . 9/3/2013
love the chapter! well every single chapter but love this chapter especially! and it's definitely been awhile. i can't wait for the last chapter! tho i still wonder what's up with james cause i've been going back to previous chapter and it seems like he went awol for awhile but i'm not so sure why still...
PSdancer54 chapter 7 . 9/2/2013
This was absolutely flawless! It was so good and I loved it so much!
Floatfoot chapter 7 . 9/2/2013
Beautiful! Awaiting next update.
truces chapter 7 . 9/1/2013
Oh, this is gorgeous. I loved it, and how the word jade was repeated throughout. You're a beautiful writer.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
Erm. You messed up one thing. It's a good story but if Molly Weasley is already Molly Weasley the. She can't marry Arthur Weasley caus they would be related
lizziependragon66 chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
Hey i just wanted to say that I love this story and can you please please please finish it? Even if you don't have time now, I just really want to find out about Dom
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