Reviews for Gift or Curse
Guest chapter 10 . 2/8/2013
You changed the pregnancy period three times. Trick said two months, The Ash said two to three, and then you wrote it as six and a half months later... /confusing
Also, the Hale/Naia relationship was super rushed. They'd JUST met but were suddenly sitting in each others laps and calling each other pet names. /weird
It wasn't a bad story you just need to work on pacing and get a beta to help keep things on track and fix some of your grammar/spelling mistakes.
claire-loves-music chapter 2 . 2/5/2013
I wonder what this "bonding" is going to entail? ;)
LOCISVU chapter 10 . 1/25/2013
Guest chapter 10 . 1/25/2013
Loving it.. Angel Bo ! 3
Thank you..
bjq chapter 10 . 1/25/2013
lightfae530 chapter 10 . 1/24/2013
i love how you ended it. Great writing. I look so forward to reading your next work.
Venetiangrl92 chapter 10 . 1/24/2013
great story! i loved it! great job! xoxo
Venetiangrl92 chapter 8 . 1/24/2013
liking this story! please update soon! so can't wait for the next chapter! xoxo
LOCISVU chapter 9 . 1/23/2013
Absolutely not!
voicekmartin chapter 9 . 1/23/2013
kagoma-solma chapter 9 . 1/23/2013
i really love this story as it is as much as i love twilight but no
ShezzaBoo0233 chapter 8 . 1/9/2013
lobe the story so far :) looking forward to next update! xxSB0233
lyndaflpn chapter 8 . 1/8/2013
love this ! thank you..
LadyAislynnWolfe2015 chapter 8 . 1/6/2013
I really hope you update soon this is a good start
DYSONKENZILOVE chapter 8 . 12/22/2012
update soon
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