Oh that’s just so sweet how James a pure blood has gotten
Embarrassed by behaving like a true gryffindor because
He loves lily though she hears enough nasty things at her
Home such as freak etc from her twisted sister and no
Parents defending their daughter lily however I’m impressed
By him going after lestrange one of the nastiest snakelike
Students yuk there ever was unlike snape,I’m highly impressed
By this remarkably honest insightful magnificent verbose
Storyline that will continue to astound me as most jilly fanfics
Have never impressed me yet yours did that from the very
First chapter making all of the marauders likeable yet
Mischevious at the same time and lily was always my
Favourite witch ever whom was loyal sassy etc so thank
You very much for such a wonderful enlightening entertaining
Wicked yet surprising story filled with tension pranks honesty
Tough love plus some stronger characters that everyone
Will love commissarate with be on their side while knowing
They might be magical but with human troubles that puzzle
Them I’m really really loving this unique quirky classic
Ultimate love story with suspenseful
Elizabeth skinner

Love how Lily isn't scared of detention

okay i don't think i've ever write a review, but i think i've got enough of this, i feel like lily has been a jerk this whole fic and i'm actually fed up, i seriously didn't know how james could be this patience, also i didn't understand why lily is mad at james the first time they kissed, just why. i really been forcing myself to finished this but i don't think i have enough patience. and i really wanna like this fic, the writing is actually good, but this im-not-your-girlfriend thing that lily has really gets boring really quick. almost half of this fic is basically just about that. like really? anw im gonna pretend i never read this. goodbye.

Cute:)

This is one of my most favorite Jily fics ever!

Alright. I’m back. Reading this again. I think this was the first long fic I ever read after getting into FF back when I had a guest account… lol. I’m excited to read it again for the second time! Yayayay here we gooooo

this is really nice !

omfg, lol, this has me thinking how funny it'd be and how I could definitely see them doing it since they've been secretly dating this whole time and have always, in some way, been certain about each other as James and Lily and Lily and James— but imagine, right, Lily tells him she loves him and he asks her out again, but instead because he's stupid over the moon right then, he actually asks her to marry him and she's quiet a minute thinking it over while he's dying of mortification and she agrees and he just about passes out and they go public with their relationship. and everyone's all "wow, you're finally dating?!" and they both, very seriously, correct them and Lily says something like, "actually, we're engaged," at the same time as James— unable to control himself now— says, "no, she's my fiancée." and everyone fucking *flips*, like conniptions left and right and someone having a stroke from anger at their nonchalance and several people simultaneously develop ulcers. like she's all, yeah, I decided he's it for me and it doesn't matter if we're moving too fast because she's certain.

James-Sirius brother relationship?

I found your fic a few days ago and I have enjoyed reading it! Looking forward to the sequel :)

Don't you think, Petunia's a little too young to be engaged? She and Lily had only one year difference between them, if I remember correctly. That means she'll be seventeen or may be eighteen. That's very young to get engaged

It was brilliant! Thank you!
I like how the relationship between Lily and James developed over the time. There is still a lot these two have to learn about each other though.

That is an excellent story! I only wish that we had more preamble leading up to Sirius and Marlene getting together.

While you are correct in that you smell scents specific to the person you are attracted to, Amortentia is like Polyjuice potion in the sense that you put a little bit of the person that you want the drinker to become infatuated(whereas with Polyjuice potion you put a bit of the person you want the drinker to become).

This is a very well written story. Fingers crossed that we get a Blackinnon relationship at some point