Reviews for Melted Core
Cheshire Cat 800 chapter 11 . 3/24
Are you going to do a sequel to this?
star chapter 11 . 2/8/2014
Update!
Mistia chapter 5 . 12/1/2013
The chapters are very short
narutonarutolove chapter 11 . 10/21/2013
WHOOO! AWESOME!

My only thing to say is how the hell is a two year old speaking in full sentences, a four year can barely do that.

loved the ending

when do we start?

Oh yeah!
Sky Howlett chapter 11 . 10/8/2013
Ok. This is flippin' awesome. That's all I can say. (Except can you maybe write more? I love this story.)
Penelope Anne Neptune chapter 9 . 5/1/2013
I hope you update soon. This is getting really good :D

With Love,
Penelope Anne
vampireXgirl13X chapter 9 . 5/1/2013
I am loving this soooooo much! I can't wait for you to update! /_
jesskalynn4 chapter 8 . 4/20/2013
can't wait for more (:
mika3451 chapter 8 . 4/19/2013
lol cant wait for your next update!
SarahHEARTSBooks chapter 8 . 4/5/2013
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fantasyblast chapter 8 . 4/5/2013
PLEASE UPDATE!
Dark Goddess 1487 chapter 7 . 3/26/2013
Can't wait for more.
Fate2017 chapter 5 . 3/7/2013
Great job! I love how Victor gives his coat to Nichole! It would be great to see more dialogue with them! Please update soon!
RowenaR15 chapter 5 . 3/5/2013
yay! you are updating again! :)
love it, love it, love it! :)
great chapters :)
lillylillyfairfax chapter 3 . 1/29/2013
Please update soon,
this is real good!
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