Reviews for You Only Live Twice
KittyKatKens chapter 1 . 12/16/2014
This is really great! I like that you made the story based on the movie, "Hannah Montana", and I love your paragraphing. It is so great how a writer can be so creative! :)
Saunders2 chapter 4 . 10/13/2014
So, Jo here! Personally, i like Taylor Lautner, so this was interesting. In chapter two, when you switched from Miley's view, to Lilly's to third- try not to do that. I think your flow is better when you write in third so i would try to write like that. Other than that, this was great. I hope you update soon!
- Jo
nileyforeverandever chapter 7 . 3/15/2013
Awww, poor Miley! I'm starting to hate Taylor(even though he's a honkie hunk and I'm totally in love with him)
Alecks454 chapter 6 . 12/9/2012
interesting...
Alecks454 chapter 2 . 12/9/2012
Yay for Lily!
Alecks454 chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
I like it! Idk if she is gonna get a boyfriends in the story but if so add the Jonas brothers and make Hannah i guess date Nick since her meet her in Meet Mr Jonas and...
Guest chapter 6 . 12/5/2012
please please please write more! it's really really good!
nileyforeverandever chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
This is like my 2nd favorite story (haha) I'm reading right now. It's a great plot. Can't wait to see what happens :)
oysterrunner chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
please update soon! I love this! you have a talent for writing!