Reviews for GIJoe: Secrets
suspreena chapter 11 . 6/5/2013
I thought I saw a mention of Hawk in here as they were getting back or had just gotten back. This is all still excellent.
Angelus-2003 chapter 5 . 5/26/2013
Just began reading this, not bad so far, have not read any of your previous work. Just wanted to point out though, A lieutenant General, is addressed as General, not by the full Rank.
AA - MamaBirdCat chapter 24 . 3/18/2013
Wow! Cam is good at reaching Snake Eyes..

Cam has had one heck of a life..
Flint is suffering here big time -
AA - MamaBirdCat chapter 18 . 3/18/2013
Snake Eyes is lost..

Flint is nerve racked..

The team has set out with some villagers to look for Scarlett..

Scarlett is awake and taking the time to mentally account for injuries, location, and prepare for the worst..

at Snake eyes question - Flint, Gung-ho and Snake Eyes confront Zimurinda.. When he doesn't answer with anything but comments that get Gung-Ho mad.. White Queen steps in and get in Zimurinda face, when she hurts him and refuses to back down - he starts speaking.. However, it isn't really helpful so eventually they walk out leaving Zimurinda to think...
AA - MamaBirdCat chapter 16 . 3/15/2013
wow! so much has happened.. Cam talked with Flint, upon Flint starting to show pity Cam got mad and told him, She wants to be treated Normal.. Flint promise that she would be and so far he's kept that promise..

Scarlett is captured, the children are back home, the man who tortured Alex and Flint is alive and in their custody.. Snake Eyes is devistated..

Cam is mad that she couldn't go track Shana - Now!
Flint is Mad that he went across leaving Shana and Snake Eyes over there..
Alex is blaming herself for everyone being here..

So this is where the Nightmare begins for Scarlett..
AA - MamaBirdCat chapter 6 . 3/14/2013
So Cam and Charlie have been given one of the older women's quarter rooms.. Alex's room is still there and both Shana and Allie have decided that it should remain for whenever they call upon Alex's talents..

So tonight is packing night and some special couples are reaffirming their devotion to one another...

I can't imagine how Allie really feels knowing that Flint is purposely leaving her behind - using medical reasons to cover his personal ones...
Bronwynn chapter 24 . 11/10/2012
This story is providing a glimpse into the horrible but real world of human trafficking. The Joes missed the ship that was transporting Shana but they know she will be headed for Amsterdam. Snake Eyes is still in a bit of shock over the fact that Shana is gone and that he is unable to find her but they did manage to get him to agree that remaining in Africa was pointless—Shana was no longer there. It was a heartbreaking moment.
Bronwynn chapter 23 . 11/10/2012
The Joes got a pretty good idea of what happened by the way the found the 'interrogation room'. They now know about Sandra and how she had a personal issue with Shana from back when they were on their mission at the ICC. They also know that Shana is alive and that she managed to kill Sandra. However, the Joes missed her by the time they arrived. Meanwhile Shana is being kept heavily drugged so she can't fight. The race continues.
Bronwynn chapter 22 . 11/10/2012
The information Zimurinda finally provided made the situation of Shana's capture seem even more grave. The clock is ticking and she possesses a rare combination of features—red hair and green eyes and hopefully that rarity will keep her unharmed. The fact that she is in the hands of human traffickers is so hard to the Joes to accept but they have to act as they have a limited time to find her before she is shipped out of the country.
Bronwynn chapter 21 . 11/4/2012
I won't miss Sandra. Shana managed to kill her in spite of her being restrained but she paid the price with the brutal beeting that followed from Sandra's goons. Now they are moving Shana again and I fear the Joes will meet another dead end when they try to locate her.
Bronwynn chapter 20 . 11/4/2012
Alex is struggling with her use of unconventional interrogation techniques but she is even more affected by her guilt over Shana's capture. Hawk now knows that one of their own is missing. I loved Flints statements at the end.
Bronwynn chapter 19 . 11/4/2012
It is an interesting twist to have Sandra back in the mix again. Sandra still holds a grudge against Shana and now that she knows the truth about what happened with Snake Eyes, the grudge has deepened. Sandra's history was sad but she has chosen to become a part of the darkness instead of to gtr herself out of it. I liked that you brought Shana's past with the FBI into the story.
Bronwynn chapter 18 . 10/27/2012
It was heartbreaking for the team to realize that without Scarlett Snake Eyes was- incomplete. They had functioned as two parts of a whole for so long that seeing them separated just seemed wrong. The team is sending out their trackers to find Shana but the tensions are high. Zimurinda is still as disgusting and evil as ever. Alex's interrogation of Zumurinda, although unconventional, did get them some information.
Bronwynn chapter 17 . 10/27/2012
This chapter gave great insight into Shana's past and some of the events that led to her becoming the woman she is today. It also explained so much about her relationship with Snake Eyes and how they had each accepted the other 'as is'. Shana maintains complete control around everyone- her family, her friends, her unit but she can be herself around Snake Eyes. And we also got to see Shana the soldier snap into focus as she assessed her situation and recalled her extensive training that prepared her for this kind of situation. Yet her thoughts, wishing for Snake Eyes to find her just reaffirmed that bond that she shared with him. She knows he will not rest until he finds her.
Bronwynn chapter 16 . 10/27/2012
I can only imagine the emotions running through Snake Eyes' mind to have to return to camp without Shana. Along with Snake, Flint and Alex are experiencing guilt that she is now missing. The team is exhausted and they need to rest and regroup before they can find her. I hope having Zimurinda as a prisoner will help their search efforts.
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