|Reviews for Mass Effect: The Helldiver Saga, The Collector War|
| Guest chapter 17 . 2/15
Way to many movie dialogue quotes in ch. 17. Some were funny, but some were utterly ridiculous. I almost quit because of it. Too much melee. And for supposed super soldiers, they have a lot of trouble with regular soldiers.
| Rick O'Shay25 chapter 15 . 3/23/2015
"His stool"? Don't you mean Kelly's?
It's too bad he didn't tell Liara what happened in his head in his drunken state, I have to wonder what Liara would have thought; I am surprised he didn't say "Kelly" out loud while in his sleep.
| Rick O'Shay25 chapter 40 . 1/15/2015
I had kinda hoped that Vasir would be shown mercy.
| Just a Crazy-Man chapter 43 . 10/28/2014
| Rick O'Shay25 chapter 14 . 8/10/2014
I would have tried to stop Samara; do not strike without need, especially if its a chick.
*Sobbing* Why did you have to kill Elnora?! She just a hot-headed scared little girl. People lie when they're scared. Plus her victim wasn't exactly a law-abiding citizen.
| Guest chapter 28 . 5/12/2014
lol zorro fight scene
| mr.grey23 chapter 42 . 4/22/2014
i love the story, but what happened to urz?
| Rick O'Shay25 chapter 25 . 1/25/2014
What? No breeding requests for Grunt and Shepard from the female clans?
| Rick O'Shay25 chapter 24 . 1/25/2014
Wow, doesn't anyone try to have Shepard save the dockworker's life? Shepard is already aiming at Enyala, he could of stopped her from the cold-blooded murder.
P.S. Why did Enyala and Austin say the same words as Jake Sully and Colonel Quaritch?
| amazingkingxman chapter 27 . 10/28/2013
I noticed the reference to Bible black and that the part with monrith is similar to a scene from that.
| Bossproject chapter 6 . 8/15/2013
I just noticed this . . . The dialogue between Shepherd and Griffin when he's setting the bomb, did you get that from Republic Commando? If so, we'll done
| SpectreFanchin10 chapter 28 . 7/23/2013
Vengeance darkens the soul. With all that anger inside that person, it will consume him or her.
| J.S.F. Northern Command chapter 35 . 6/30/2013
U know having a geth dreadnought maight be a big advantage in the fight against the reapers.
| EzeikelShepard chapter 37 . 6/24/2013
Well that was a nice explanation on how the team readied themselves...great work
| Ronin Kenshin chapter 43 . 6/11/2013
one of the best fics to ever grace this site it's got it all action, sex and violance and good character developement truly great work can't wait to start the third part great work