Reviews for Before Life Happened
Guest chapter 5 . 10/30/2013
Good story. Too short of chapters. Make them longer. Also, this story needs more dialogue. It has too much "thoughts". You should have Joe and Mel express these thoughts in dialogue:) Keep writing:) Hope that helps:)
Guest chapter 4 . 9/21/2012
Good story so far! Keep it up:) Hope you can update soon and make longer chapter please!:)
Guest chapter 4 . 9/20/2012
Cute story! :)
Guest chapter 2 . 9/19/2012
BellaItaliana93 chapter 2 . 9/17/2012
Great story so far/ Curious to see what the plot of the story and the point of the story actually is. There isn't enough words in the chapters to really judge the story though. I think you need to make the chapters longer. Can't wait to read the rest!:)
asanto481JB chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
I like it :)
Literati Lover chapter 2 . 9/16/2012
Awwww so cute :) Loved it!