|Reviews for The Other Half|
| Grant chapter 15 . 4/29/2015
I congratulate you for all of this effort you put into wording the whole, Cave story... Story?, it was great, entertaining and well done, thank you for the good times
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/26/2014
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/26/2014
Son of a..
| Celestail Spirit chapter 15 . 3/19/2014
i loved this story! it's even better when you listen to the music from the game while reading it. i can't tell u how epic it wasdurring the final battle! this was just amazing!
| Wolfie Joestar chapter 15 . 2/17/2014
Dude, this was so awesome that this deserves a sequel. This is one of the best fanfictons I have ever read.
| Dalailthis chapter 15 . 2/17/2014
I LOVE this story. Great storytelling on your part and was Definitely worth the read.
| MD chapter 15 . 5/12/2013
You truely are a great author, this deserved WAY more reveiws :D
P.S. Cute! Luv QuoteXCurly
| JetPlyr505 chapter 9 . 2/18/2013
Nice work you're doing there, bud. I really like what you write and I think it is awesome. Keep on going!
| Quote chapter 7 . 2/9/2013
Ah, I remember this happening. Thank god I saved her. 3
| Sami Danohk chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
I'm glad to see a story where Quote gets Curly out of there. I mean, why didn't he do that in the game? It would've made a lot more sense.
| Guest chapter 6 . 1/27/2013
Sweet, new chapters!
| Random-StoryKeeper chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
Wow, nice first chapter! At the Living Waterway (in the game), there is a notebook in a house that says that the robots shut down if they are exposed underwater for too long. This is so they can prevent short-circuiting. Not sure if robots have lungs, or if they feel the need for air when they are submerged.
Some things to improve this chapter would be to fix up some of the spelling errors. There was only maybe one or two - one was a point where "you're" was used in the place of "your" - but other than that, all of Quote's thoughts felt dead-on believable.
| I am done here 727184 chapter 4 . 11/19/2012
Omg noooo! Curly, wai u do that? D:
Heh, anyway, brilliant chapter as always. :D I sent you the next chapter of our story in case you didn't know. It's your turn to write!
| Kysymysmerkki chapter 3 . 10/29/2012
This was somehow so touching! I can't understand why haven't I noticed this fic before now...
| The Almighty Mr. L chapter 3 . 10/24/2012
Eet ees so nice...the robots, they ees so beautiful.