|Reviews for Move along|
| Cocobutterrox chapter 2 . 10/6/2012
Hehehe oooooh I can't wait for this tom to wake up (I'm assuming it's Plato...bwahaha...ha).
Haha I love this part: "'So, you are Plato.' It wasn't a question." HA Cori and Tanto are so creepy XD
OMEC I LOVE how you write Cori and Tanto's parts! It makes me think of two cops interrogating a suspect o_O
Yikes! Fate sounds cruel :P I wonder what the psychics mean by all that...Wait, there's a word for this...FORESHADOWING! :D :D
YAYAYAY! Great chapter! Update soon!
| Cocobutterrox chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
"Sure he is male, Etcy. Look at his body!" "It also could be a quite muscular queen." Haha! xD Ooh, ooh, and this part: "It's a tom." "Does he look good?" Hahaha XD
OOOH! OOOH! I think it's Plato :D hehe.
Ah, that's so cool that you can write beautifully in two different languaes! I can't even tell that English isn't your mothertongue language! (Except I think somewhere at the beginning you meant to say "the" but still had it as "das" ;D hehe) I really hope you update soon! I must know what happens next! You have hooked me in already! ;) Can't wait for more :)
| TuggersTuxedoTom chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
Love it! Can't wait to see what happens next :)
In your author's note at the bottom, I have to ask: what the heck is "mothertongue"?