Reviews for Trying Not to Fall Apart
NoMeImporta32 chapter 1 . 6/5
the-speed-reader chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
That was purely sweet. I loved it.
JesusFreak77 chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
Lady Elvira chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
Lovely :)
Really sweet how they finally enunciate with each other.
It really shows how much Jade loves Roy and that he still loves her too. Especially the sentence "At that moment, the small rundown apartment was the most beautiful place in the world." was very lovely in there.
And the fact that Lian crying while they kissing was in some way really fitting and I am glad that you bring this One Shot to an happy ending.
Well written!

leafysummers chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
Perfection? This story was perfection! Nice job! :)
Irenerb chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
Love it B)
Guest chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
Awww I never saw Jade be so nice.
MidnightRoulette chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Omg so basically you broke my feels ;_;

This was really well written and just so, so perfect. And really I haven't seen that many post Salvage or post Bloodlines Roy/Jade so kudos to you for writing it. But great job! This is exactly how I pictured they would be after being separated for so long.

I hope you write more in the future :)
anon chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
very nice