Reviews for Unintentional Inveiglement |
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xSeverusSnapesLoverx chapter 70 . 10/25 I know you said you’d never abandon this story so I hope that’s true you got me addicted to it and now it’s almost 5 years since the last update I absolutely love this story definitely in my top five fanfics ever so I sincerely hope by some miracle you come back to it and soon! |
mslm90 chapter 55 . 4/4 Please please finish this story! It’s one of my favourites! |
Guest chapter 26 . 4/2 Snape is such a git |
Professor Severus Snape's Wife chapter 70 . 2/11 please please please please finish this wonderful story! please?! |
Guest chapter 70 . 12/6/2023 It’s 2023, three years since an update. I have never dreaded coming to the end of any work like I have this one and it will break my heart if it’s never finished. I. An. Unhealthfully. Invested. You gotta come back. |
Victoria9977 chapter 70 . 12/5/2023 Ok, finished reading. The first 60 chapters kept me on the edge of the seat. I literately had to hide away from by boyfriend to read this story in peace and I regret nothing! I didn’t like the last 10 chapters as much. Too much Severus’ fluff fussing over Hermione and Hermione’s illness didn’t work for me. Still, I’ll come back to it to see how this plot line connects with the rest of the story if you ever decide to come back to it:) |
Victoria9977 chapter 63 . 12/5/2023 Also still thinking about the previous chapters, I think there was too much fluff. Severus acted out of character when fighting for Hermione’s life. I’m usually all in for more vulnerable and sweet Severus, but it somehow came out forced and superficial. Don’t know if that’s just me or someone else shares this opinion too. |
Victoria9977 chapter 61 . 12/5/2023 I liked that you went against the canon and made injured Hermione being nurtured back to health by Severus. It was a great setting for Severus to realise what he truly feels for Hermione. Still, it felt unnecessary long and I wish it hadn’t go above two chapters. |
Victoria9977 chapter 41 . 12/5/2023 I progressed through the story and noticed you shared with us that you struggled with wrist problems for a while. I’m sorry to hear that. I can image it wasn’t easy to write in pain and I appreciate every chapter you put together for us. I imagine it might be why you discontinued this story, which I strongly support. Health comes first. Besides, I imagine that writing is your side hobby and you have life of your own. Being so avid reader of SSHG stories myself, I think it’s easy to forget that and become upset when authors don’t post soon enough or stop altogether. I just wanted to say that I understand it and I appreciate how much time and love you put into that story. It’s lovely and reread it many times. Thank you |
Victoria9977 chapter 31 . 12/4/2023 I stumbled upon this story some years ago but never took the time to fully read it. It’s incredible. Love the intimate scenes and colourful descriptions. Your language is very sophisticated too, it’s a pleasure to read. Hope you will continue the story at some point. It’s a shame it’s left unfinished |
Kayydotmurr chapter 70 . 8/23/2023 Ahh this was really great! I love your filch so much, and while I do have hope you’ll come back and finish this story, at least it ends at a point where I can envision the happy ending if not! I do wonder where the heck hermione’s wand and beaded bag are. Just… no one cares? Is it truly lost? I’d assume post-war Harry and Ron would know how important it is to recover those things for her. |
lucifyr04 chapter 52 . 7/19/2023 Wow a sweet Filch nice. |
lucifyr04 chapter 32 . 7/18/2023 Well it's common knowledge to cat owners to have flat dish/plate instead of a dish that bothers their whiskers when eating. That's why they won't eat the sides coz it bothers them. |
IsupportWriters chapter 6 . 4/19/2023 Oh. My. Goodness. Yes an eSpanking has ben sent to you. How dare you leave us hanging |
kairi killed her chapter 5 . 4/12/2023 ahh this is wonderful. i love your work. I love how Snape looses just a tad bit of control and then reigns himself reluctantly back in |