|Reviews for Bonds of Time II: Fighting Fate|
| cedric dursley chapter 45 . 7/18
so Harry has all three hollows. sounds like Dumbledore wanted Harry to win the elder wand.
| SilverStarWolfGoddessAmarantha chapter 26 . 7/10
THE MAP! WHERE'S THE MAP!? THE MARAUDER'S MAP COULD TELL THEM WHERE PETTIGREW IS! THE MAP! Yeah, sorry. I just like being a bit too over enthusiastic sometimes.
| Almarinda chapter 107 . 7/6
Love this series except that Snape still dies. :(
| togamaster0 chapter 1 . 7/1
While the stoey itself is a fun read, It has some clear problems. First, the pacing is a bit too fast, and Harry will overturn the wizarding world the times in four chapters. The other big problem is that it's does not take much from the original material. Character's are misrepresented, and rules with explanations ignored. Before writing this review I got to the point where Hermione asks why they can't use guns. Dumbledore roars at her because it's not proper to use guns. First Dumbledore is usually patient, as well as unusually progressive in the wizarding world. Then there is the fact that the non-use of guns in the wizarding world is explained. Apparently machines and mechanisms malfinction around magic, which is why there is so little modern technology in HP. Although sniper rifles would probably work plus that rule has been violated in canon before. So yeah thats it.
| mommalminer chapter 79 . 6/30
Who is crouch impersonating? I need to know NOW!
| Guest chapter 45 . 6/26
Um .. Hedwig asked? You meant Harry asked, I assume.
| loverGryffindor chapter 41 . 6/8
i want no need neville and luna together by the end of third year!
| Gleas chapter 4 . 6/3
That's one scary vow...
| Gleas chapter 1 . 6/2
This is... amusing and I thought one can't control fate...so I have to assume fate will succeed... eventually... XD!
| Just an observer1 chapter 65 . 5/17
Amelia is pregnant
| nawdean chapter 52 . 5/6
Hi there. I just want to say I quite like the way Draco Black is going. I always liked the character in the original stories, but I'll like him more now that he is less of a bully. I don't expect him to change overnight, but I think you are doing a good job with your version of the character. Also, I like the more mature themes. (written from a 2ds)
| celine.sLineC-Line chapter 105 . 5/2
omg very good end of story
that second part was quiet good
i normaly don't like draco, but there its ok
i love harry ginny _
and qui write very good, yu have some fun and nice ideas
| celine.sLineC-Line chapter 48 . 5/1
how convenient that she died, now neville can just choise luna and get over that crush
| celine.sLineC-Line chapter 35 . 5/1
what point taking a vow of honor if dumbledor can give secret to every one without losing his magic ...
| celine.sLineC-Line chapter 27 . 5/1
i find it quiet disgusting... and ginny and harry are laughing about it...
that luna and nevill first were hanging together and kissing good night, then neville change his mind and want to be together with daphne
there is hell no chance at hell i would give my trust to that neville
to hurt other like this, and cheat..; sorry but thats cheating... luna said they weren't girlfriends an boyfriends, but sharing kisses and walking in hand is a a big step of trust..; just to walk away of this trust and choise someone els...
i never understand people saying : oh i don't know wish one i love...
it so sound like: "i love so many people and so many people loves me, i can't choise, can't i get all of them... " ...
i don't think ginny and harry would have understand that... they had other people with who they hang out, that ok, because they never shared a kiss or a hug or walking hands...
sorry, i m just a little fed up
i don't think neville deserve luna. Luna deserve someone just better than him.
He just sound like a follower: he is going with daphne because she kiss him, he didn't have to choise or make a decision
weak mind, weak people
i don't like him