Reviews for A Captain's Tale II: Tales untold
LJSTPFAN chapter 31 . 7/27/2013
ayiyi I finally managed to log in xD

This is such a superb ending to the story. :-')
I love the part where Victoria helped Minerva to see that she really is beautiful...:P :)
xD at the part where Onyx does a double take ;P and really nice descriptions of the dresses too. :D

. I realllly loved the ending with Minerva telling her story to the little ones. Really sweet. :) :)

Congratulations on finishing the series! *throws colored confetti in the air* LOL :D
Kitty.M.Smith chapter 31 . 7/20/2013
Good God I can't believe this is over...WHAT THE HELL AM I SUPPOSED TO REVIEW NOW?!
Ahem anyway...

This was wonderful Britt. You really wrapped the story up and did a wonderful job and showing a little bit of everything. The way you ended it with pregnant Minerva telling the whole story was fabulous and rather unexpected. :D I also thought it funny when she shooed Kitty off. XD Anyhow overall amazing story and I'm truly going to miss it. :,)
Long live A Captain's Tale.
LJSTPFAN chapter 30 . 7/3/2013
w00t! :D

Yay! Everyone returns safely..."I just love a happy ending..." xD

O.o Minerva?! Everyone run for the hills! LOL
Kitty.M.Smith chapter 30 . 6/28/2013
This is brilliant britt really loved it, truly
MissMirrors chapter 29 . 6/16/2013
O.M.G. That entire story, was so so cute! I don't want it to end!
fantreasureplanetljs chapter 29 . 5/23/2013
*ohnoes* Poor Victoria! I don't blame her. :/

O.o I like Emily's last name...Steelforge. I wouldn't want to mess with her in battle. :D

XD Victoria: "what's wrong with me?"
Amelia" first of all, your out of bed..." XD
Guest chapter 29 . 5/22/2013
OHMEGERD LOTS ER EMERTERNS

I LERVED VIS BERT KEEP ERT ERP!
LJSTPFAN chapter 28 . 5/15/2013
O.o Naomi and Tori ya gotta stop sneeking up on people LOL
Oooh...I wonder how Victoria is going to handle this...? everybody duck and cover! *hides under a desk*
SophieSwag chapter 28 . 5/14/2013
I CANT STOP SMILING :D!

Sophie :P
Kitty.M.Smith chapter 28 . 5/13/2013
This was awesome Britters Oh nu poor Victoria she's gonna find out about...:( I'm anxious for the next chapter. p This was awesome.
LJSTPFAN chapter 27 . 5/4/2013
O;O legasp! rogue dragons? Minerva no! :(
Ascante what in blazes did you do to Minnie? .O

Ohnoes! :P :'( the drama!
LOL sucky ending not a sucky ending. ;) cliffhanger! O.O
Kitty.M.Smith chapter 27 . 5/2/2013
This was wonderful Britt! I loved the entire thing, it was really wonderful. p

Ascante what have you done O.O
This is just brilliant. XD
LJSTPFAN chapter 26 . 4/29/2013
V Ahh little ones are always a joy...lol I liked little Tori asking her mum about the baby and asking if she can have a brother. ;P How sweet of you Tori to give your teddy to the baby.

*legasp* I wonder why Ilysa's sister went missing...? :O *.*

NIce chapter! Sorry I didn't get to it till recently... ;
Kitty.M.Smith chapter 26 . 4/14/2013
Aw-she-I-aaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwww so bittersweet. :( :)

I loved this Britt. Nice seeing into the past and then the present, conflict nice, description, etc. Loved the chapter :D
LJSTPFAN chapter 25 . 4/1/2013
:'( Poor Tori and young Britt/Kitty. :( Very touching moment there...I always get teary-eyed at soldier funerals. :(

:-) Hmmmm... I wonder just who might be taking up the Queen's interest eh? LOL

o.o Very cool with the Mangre stages. :D :D:D :D

OvO Ooh! Pirates! Run! lol

Great chapter there! :D
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